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Believe It Or Not

Believe it or not He swore by the day he sighted the earth This step he took Was not aimed at piercing anyone But to show his appreciation At exactly the time (or on time) Had he known the blessed wouldn't be pleased With this gesture He would have Hands down And waved for naught 'What are my mistakes' He asked Cos his heart is mixed This mind is now full with mix feelings The memory of strange letters that gloomed at his eyes Believe it or not He had never wish for anything If nothing will make him live a simple life And meet his Creator in good shape Then he will be satisfied with that hope Than a hope of something Where he wishes for nothing A.O

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Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 2/13/2014 3:42:00 AM

Congrats on win with this great work Oyewole.

Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 2/13/2014 4:30:00 AM

Thanks to have visited, read and commented, Kayode.

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/12/2014 12:09:00 PM

great to read this winner Abdulhafeez congratulations

Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 2/13/2014 4:30:00 AM

Thanks to have visited, read and commented, Joe.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/12/2014 9:17:00 AM

Enjoyed the poem and congrats on the win,

Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 2/13/2014 4:29:00 AM

Thanks to have visited, read and commented, Dr R.M.

Joseph May

Date: 2/12/2014 9:13:00 AM

Congrats on a fine win AO

Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 2/13/2014 4:28:00 AM

Thanks to have visited, read and commented, J.M.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/12/2014 3:28:00 AM

- Another contest sponsored by: Giorgio V. - "Impress me IV" - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM,A.O. - ENJOYABLE TO READ YOURS AND A PLEASURE TO PARTICIPATE :))) - Anne-Lise :)

Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 2/13/2014 4:27:00 AM

Thanks to have visited, read and commented, A-L Andresen..

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 5/8/2013 11:37:00 AM

This is very good. A lot of times we all have those mixed feelings, but they don't last. at the end I only wish for God to forgive my sins. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 2/13/2014 4:27:00 AM

Thanks to have visited, read and commented, Lucilla.