Believe

I don’t see you Yet I believe and fear you the most Your existing in my being Make me wish for impossible things!

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Shannon Deane

Date: 11/16/2011 11:32:00 AM

Writing comes from somewhere deep...whether fueled by loss and pain or joy and happiness, no poems should go unwritten if bursting to be free...you are honest in your writing...be not afraid to be you when you write...luv shannon

Ashek Rahaman

Date: 11/23/2010 8:39:00 AM

Carol thank you. I don't know how long i will be able to keep on writing being my writings are only about losing a certain person

Ashek Rahaman

Date: 11/23/2010 8:35:00 AM

Dr Mehta I did not understood your comments?

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/22/2010 12:57:00 PM

I would like you to give a once over to the form of Ode, ashek

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/22/2010 10:37:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ashek. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol