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hold on to your faith sometimes it is all it takes for fate to step in
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/13/2012 8:29:00 AM
Stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments on my writings Wilma. I hope to be reading your poetry for many years to come. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and may you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/3/2012 6:32:00 PM
You stuck to the 5 7 5 format in this intriguing little poem. Good job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/19/2012 3:55:00 PM
7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-! I am having a party with 7s to say I LOVE THE WISDOM IN THIS SENRYU!! My mustard seed sits all soggy in my pocket! Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 5/18/2012 8:30:00 PM
It takes such inner strength to keep the eyes on the goal. Your words reminded me of that and more Wilma. Wonderful to contemplate! Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 5/18/2012 11:39:00 AM
How true, Lovely write.
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Date: 5/17/2012 6:36:00 PM
I live with every step being in a puddle of fate. It's how I see and breath. Love to you Cape Town Honey. Michael
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Date: 5/16/2012 6:24:00 PM
If we could just faith the size of a mustard seed, we could move mountains..Enjoyed reading this one..Great topic and presentation..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Date: 5/16/2012 5:36:00 PM
VERY nice, Wilma. Sure like your recent avatar too!
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Date: 5/16/2012 2:27:00 PM
Wilma how true, love it..David
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Date: 5/16/2012 12:31:00 PM
So true Wilma.Enjoyed your words very much here.Yes,we should stick to our faiths.
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