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Belated

Oh, what I would have told you if I had known you were leaving. But you were gone in a glimpse and I am dumb and grieving. It is late but some can be written, my conscience allows no less. You were a woman singularly sublime few men could have been as blessed. In every manner, form, and fashion you were an example supreme. You were of a quality not to be found except in an unforgettable dream. I know I didn't listen lovingly enough to counsel I too often tended to ignore. I discounted what you had to say. I'm sorry for that and for so much more. Had I had the time to open my heart these are the words I'd whisper to you. Yes, I should have said them before-- but somehow I believe you already knew.

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Date: 11/1/2021 6:03:00 PM
So beautifully soulfully written Paul! The flow and harmony of the stanzas till the end is magical as the mementos of the moments of the untold were disappearing at a glance, but still with the tinct of reflection that someone knew about it! Thanks for the sublime piece! Hugs Silpika
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 11/2/2021 2:59:00 PM
You are so very kind, SILPIKA. Your comment has made my day. Please know of my graitude. Hugs, Paul.
Date: 10/25/2021 8:20:00 AM
Hi Paul……what a sweet touching poem. Really liked it. Debx
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 10/25/2021 6:29:00 PM
How very kind of you to make such a gracious comment Please know of my appreciation, Debx. Hugs, Paul
Date: 10/24/2021 11:16:00 AM
A very poignant piece Paul, the theme reminds me of the Elton John song, 'sorry seems to be the hardest word' hope you and your loved ones are well:-) hugs Jan xx
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 10/24/2021 3:39:00 PM
Dear Jan, I thought my poem was all wrong, then you came along. Please know of my gratitude for fixing my attitude, Thank you, thank you. With hugs and every good wish, Paul.

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