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I had an elderly friend who I would take on art excursions, or easy nature hikes. He was a poet who joined my Poetry Circle that met at Knobby's Beach when I lived on the Gold Coast in Queensland.  We especially loved going to Swell sculpture Festival on Currumbin Beach. When I moved to America he developed Macular degeneration and he wrote how sad he was that  we could not go to see the Swell Sculptures anymore.  I sent for an illustrated brochure so I could describe the pieces on display in 2007 and wrote this poem for him.  He lived to a week short of his 103rd birthday.

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Being Your Eyes for Swell 2007 Swell: Currumbin Sculpture Festival For Fred Picture us arm in arm, strolling, the crunch of sand underfoot, the scent of sea air, the touch of sea wind on our skin, again on the beach at Currumbin. Your eyes are failing now yet, with my words and your imagination, with the senses of a beachcomber- we’re finding treasures as we search out the sculptures The Surging Wonder by Nicole Byrne I read, is a filigreed horn curving from the grass, from where its shadow forms a crescent. Comprised of all sizes of welded washers- it is a silvery moon or, an ancient rhino horn that has been honey -combed by the elements Speaking of ancient this “Ammonite” by Daniel Clemmett seems so authentic; a fossil in the round, metal parts tightly coiled as if a million years had past- It shimmers in the sunlight - an affirmation to time. This giant bird’s nest made of sticks is in the right setting It has a backdrop of bare trees, as if the material had been selected from the surrounds. Makes you want to look up for a giant parent bird perhaps a pterodactyl. It seems hollow waiting for the eggs. Now we are looking at the horizon of the sea and the sea is gazing back at us through eye apertures, blue and eerie. It is a giant face mask probably concrete but as brown as a coconut shell and it appears Polynesian A carving rising from the sand as if left by a lost tribe. Here is the Queen of Hearts -a red heart-shaped bodice with slender white arms outstretched to the clouds and blue sky. She towers over us as if waiting to dance on the waves. We move on to a stone rose with perfectly marbled petals. it is called the Rhythm of Love – and listed for a small fortune- $30,000 in the catalog. A sculpture of a coral stand entwined around a clown fish- adds whimsy and truth of nature’s form I can’t help feeling that Stempost would have evoked memories of your days at sea The timber is curved like a ships bow and a silver wrap is whipped as if by a strong wind. Here are mosaic footprints set down in the sand large and solid to water’s edge- symbolic of waves not being able to wash away, traces of our passing The Big Bad Banksia men are here with twisted stick arms. They call back the stories of bush babies and childhood enchantment. If I had a spare $3,000 I’d buy one for the garden. At the same price I could have a Doberman from “The Pack.” A set of metal dogs. One is in the pose of rolling on the sand, another in a crouched pose above that one- ready to play. One more stands with its head side-ways as if howling. We have traversed the length of the beach exhibit with my words and your imagination. Remember how I said,“Let’s go to the Surf Club for lunch? The seagulls were swooping then, riding the wind as they did If I look back the way we came I almost believe that you can see them.

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Date: 3/2/2022 8:35:00 PM
Wow, SuZ, this is a wonderful journey of sentiment and poetry, terrible flooding in Queensland, i have one of my sons there.
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Date: 3/7/2022 4:58:00 PM
Hi Harry: Good to hear from you. I am no longer in Queensland. I hope your son doesn’t get any damage from the floods. Will visit soon. SuZ
Date: 2/14/2022 10:48:00 AM
What a beautiful and moving description for Fred who continued to travel with you even without his sight. You gave him a priceless gift; as you shared this priceless poem with us. Thank You. I wrote a piece "A Gift of Sight", but my story was about a single day. Happy Valentine's Day! :)Paulette
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Date: 2/17/2022 6:04:00 AM
Hi Paulette…..Yes I read your beautiful poem which reminded me of this one I wrote back in 2007. Thanks for your thoughtful comment and for stopping by to read. Hugs SuZ
Date: 2/12/2022 11:07:00 PM
What a loving thing to do with a dear friend in need. The poem was beautiful and allowed me to travel along with the two of you. It was a very pleasant and enjoyable experience. Thank you for sharing it with us through your poetry, Suzanne. This is the first of your poems I've read and my first visit to your poetry. I'll be back often. This is a FAV and I'm now a follower of your poetry. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
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Date: 2/13/2022 4:33:00 AM
Good Morning Bill: Thanks for the kind words on my poem. Art is so uplifting to the soul in any form it presents. I always think the secret to life is to honor beauty. Thanks for your kind words and visit. Bless you. SuZ
Date: 2/8/2022 1:37:00 PM
Quite a beautiful tribute to your friend; I am sure that he would be pleased. Lovely piece.
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Date: 2/13/2022 4:36:00 AM
Thanks so much. I appreciate your visit. SuZ
Date: 2/5/2022 6:49:00 PM
This is an incredible piece of descriptive writing! I can see, in my minds eye the images that you describe so vividly; as I hope your friend did - a wonderful gift to him, Suzanne.
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Date: 2/13/2022 4:38:00 AM
I really appreciate your our kind response to my writing . SuZ
Date: 2/5/2022 6:09:00 PM
Hello Suzanne ... enjoyed going on this tour with you. Your friend would have been so grateful for your kindness. There are sculptures just out of Broken Hill that I visited quite some years ago also - thank you Suzanne - Lindsay
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Date: 2/13/2022 4:39:00 AM
Thanks Lindsay: it is always fun to encounter Art in whatever form…..glad you enjoyed my virtual tour. SuZ
Date: 2/2/2022 8:43:00 AM
What a wonderful gift you gave your poet friend in this poem SuZ. I went to look at the amazing sculptures at the website you provided. You depicted your view perfectly in great detail in this lovely poem SuZ. Outstanding! I am Faving this beauty. Thank you for sharing this. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/13/2022 4:40:00 AM
Hi Connie: Catching up on personal replies. I so appreciate you, dear friend. Aloha, SuZ
Date: 1/30/2022 4:45:00 PM
This took me back a way; beautiful memories unfold and are captivating in this read.
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Date: 2/1/2022 4:10:00 AM
Good Morning M.L. So pleased you enjoyed my poem. It was a very gratifying project. Best, SuZ.
Date: 1/30/2022 5:31:00 AM
How wonderful is this poem traversing through the memory lane. A splendid tribute to your dear friend who shared your interest. I enjoyed the ride with you SuZ, while you relived walking through the exhibit.
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Date: 1/30/2022 12:26:00 PM
Happy you enjoyed i. Vijay: Some years it is better than others but the beach re-sculpts itself in the wind and waves, so it is always a timeless experience. Hugs, SuZ
Date: 1/29/2022 10:40:00 PM
Outstanding work you did here for your dear friend. Wow, he lived to about 103. that's really something, Suz.
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Date: 1/30/2022 2:53:00 AM
So glad you enjoyed it, Andrea: He was an amazing poet always exploring the big questions. I was reminded of this poem by Paulette when I read her poem about an encounter with a blind passenger on a bus.

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