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Being Brought Down

Submitting internal thoughts, in abound In the seeing what's around found, Seeing the seen, to unseen human themes It's us, all, the human thrall where we'll fall <*>

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/8/2018 9:39:00 PM
A sad commentary on our existence, James, but it is nice to see you here. Hope all is going well in your life! Have a wonderful holiday season, Carolyn
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Date: 12/8/2018 6:26:00 PM
A short piece about humans, and they're uselessness ;) All we need is a visitation to create the panic and turmoil this planet needs NOW ;) and to watch it is PRIME VIEWING :) Thank you kindly Jan xx always xx
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Date: 12/8/2018 5:46:00 PM
Such expression of conflict in your lines James, so lovely to see you posting, love to olive Eloisa and the bump:-) hugs Jan xx
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