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Behoove

He misconstrued my intention of friendship Forver sealing our fate to be acquaintances Married to others with a nagging sense of loss Keeping our mates at bay away from true intimacy

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2011 5:41:00 PM

It's sad when this happens. If I am reading correctly its meaning. I came back here in some older poems to tell you what was on the news about Ashton. He was with another woman messing around in a hot tub on his anniversary night. I think that shows a great deal of insensitivity. It's bad enough to be unfaithful but to do it on a night that should be sacred to them both, that's what put me off on that guy forever! (he has become really full of himself, you can see it in his commercials)

John Rhinem

Date: 11/3/2010 12:12:00 PM

Smile ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'Dear, Precious & Priceless Doris Culverhouse,' Amid The Ever Tender & Loving Hands Which Brush, 'Such Beautiful Love;'" Bye My Dear!:) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 11/3/2010 12:08:00 PM

Smile ~ Working on it! ~ Very intriguing poe once more "My Dear, Lovely & Precious Doris Culverhouse!!!'" ~ Hope that "Your Beauties" day is going gloriously for "Your Treasures" my dear &, "Thank You" for the kind com ~ So, trouble in paradise perhaps? Smile, never allow temptations swaying to turn "Your Beautiful Heart" away from, the gift of a love once given my dear for, all things work towards the treasures of happiness', forever meant to be's.... ~ Cont:)

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 11/1/2010 10:28:00 AM

feelings of true friendship with betraying payback. it makes me remember my heart break which made me gave relationships with the opposite sex long break.

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 11/1/2010 10:24:00 AM

Hello Doris, Love how you have put this together. Well done and it is going into my favorites....... Thank you for all your kind words. As Always, Shar

Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/1/2010 9:19:00 AM

real feeling on friendship with sad touch.i enjoyed it,doris.fabiyas

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/1/2010 5:54:00 AM

Looking forward to the end..Mom

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/1/2010 2:28:00 AM

A flowing gift that arouses the senses, doris.. congrats on being featured this week.. "fall sunset" is astonishing, especially now that it's raining softly over here.... best of luck in the contest... hope your weekend is going great! thanks for passing by my page as well.. warmest, nette

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/31/2010 8:57:00 PM

Doris, I reckon you got it down to a tee but will be back to check if you made changes to it ;) enjoy the week ahead

William Kershaw

Date: 10/31/2010 6:45:00 PM

Doris, this one makes me feel so sad for you! I have been fortunate enough to consider myself intimate with more women than I care to remember, most of whom I have never even shaken hands with. Not all intimacy is physical. Well done dear lady. I will keep thyis one on my favs list. Love, Will

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 10/31/2010 11:24:00 AM

Love how the difficulties of friendships is conveyed :) Sheri

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/31/2010 8:46:00 AM

You're there!! I don't think you need to work on it further, Doris. This description of friendships versus lovers is right on target. Excellent work! Love, Carolyn

Joy Wellington

Date: 10/31/2010 8:00:00 AM

So there! We finally get your intent. Hmmm. Yep! That happens sometimes....have to dop the barriers of off-limit. Keep the thoughts coming my friend. Luv, Joy (Jew)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/31/2010 7:45:00 AM

Well its sounds delicious so far Doris.. and congrats on the beautiful poem HG wrote for u entitle D O R I S ...which I just read.. u have captured his heart to have written such lovely lines for u ... a great tribute u deserve very much my friend.. go read.. on this Halloween Sunday..

Joy Wellington

Date: 10/30/2010 8:23:00 PM

OK Doris! Out with it!! Congrats on being featured this week. Luv Joy (Jew)