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Behold

For as long as you live, you are tortured. And torment comes in the eye of the beholder I envision a master in the night and on the dawn Escaping tyranny of Unbelievable sacrifice Surrounded by a periscope That leads him to believe He’s trapped. Calling out for help but in a whisper In the mystical land of Crime and punishment He grabs for a purified ligule But his grasp is unbidden and he slips To fall on hard pavement And a reservoir from the grey clouds begin To fall Within quad rival

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/20/2013 2:55:00 PM
Kayka, :-) :-) your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 7/20/2013 1:24:00 PM
Hi Kayla, , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 7/20/2013 11:34:00 AM
- Hello new member:Kayla - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - It's nice to be able to read your first poem. - You write very well, I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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