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Inside This Castle On a Hill

Intrepid knight, sweet gallant, hear my plea. Inside this castle on a hill, confined, I wane. On reading this, please speed to me, else I shall be to hopelessness resigned! I sadly saw you off to the Crusade. Recall the pact we made. I gave my heart to you! May God be with you. How I’ve prayed when you return, we never more shall part. With utter faith in you, I write this now. My kin were killed. A cruel lord took control. He'd have me for his wife, but I'll not bow. He has my land but can't possess my soul. Please, trust my go-between as I trust you. My love, let not our pact be proved untrue. For the Contest on a Hill Poetry Contest of Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 11/9/2020 9:52:00 PM
Oh, I just saw that I commented on this in March, so you must have dusted off this golden oldie for a contest and gotten another win! I love this for its classic style and context. I didn't fave it before, but I am now!
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Date: 3/31/2020 1:19:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea. Such a wonderful medieval setting for this Arthurain like sonnet. Really nice work, my friend. Be well.
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Date: 3/30/2020 8:45:00 PM
This poem was a joy to read. As always, Andrea Beautifully written. Congrats. JC Hawkens
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Date: 3/30/2020 5:44:00 PM
A nice write in ye olde English style of the proverbial maiden in the castle. Congratulations on another winning sonnet! Enjoyed the read ~ John
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Date: 5/1/2016 5:59:00 PM
Andrea,, Congratulations on your castle on a hill win... love Linda
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Date: 4/28/2016 9:00:00 AM
Congrats on your Great placement, Andrea! The sonnet queen!
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Date: 4/28/2016 8:17:00 AM
Lovely sonnet. Congrats on your win, Andrea.
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Date: 4/27/2016 1:53:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea... well done.
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Date: 4/27/2016 1:35:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Andrea
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Date: 4/27/2016 1:25:00 PM
great poem and story Andrea. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/27/2016 12:55:00 PM
Andrea, awesome poem and an awesome win, many congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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Date: 4/27/2016 12:54:00 PM
Congrats on your great win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/27/2016 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 6/12/2014 1:45:00 PM
Hi Andrea.Have decided to read through all your sonnets. This is a good one and I think you would have fit right in during Shakespeare's time. Your are a fine poet, Andrea and it is a pleasure to read.... Robert.
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Date: 6/7/2014 11:03:00 PM
Andrea what an enchanting, charming, sweet, intriguing and captivating fairy tale. I was enthralled with this story till the end. Thank you for the sweet and kind comment on my Path Of Hate poem. Hugs
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Date: 5/23/2012 12:16:00 PM
CONGRATS on this well written sonnet. love phyl
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Date: 5/21/2012 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Paula Swanson's "Pact" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/20/2012 5:11:00 PM
A charming and beautiful plea....excellent write. Hugs
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Date: 5/20/2012 3:27:00 PM
wonderfully written and beautifully rhymed. congrats on your win in the contest!
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Date: 5/20/2012 12:05:00 PM
Congrad's on your winning write. Light & Love
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Date: 5/20/2012 8:42:00 AM
You are a kin to the masters of poetry. This reaches far back to the classics. Nicely done, and congrats to you, Andrea!
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Date: 5/20/2012 8:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your wim in the contest. A romantic tale to capture our hearts.
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Date: 5/20/2012 2:08:00 AM
Hey Rapunzel, congrats on your super win..David
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Date: 5/20/2012 12:41:00 AM
Congratulations yet again Andy, nice one xx
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Date: 5/19/2012 10:12:00 PM
Well done Andrea. Will you enter this in the other contest too? Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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