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Behind the Curtains

It's cold behind the curtains. The frost is settling in. The icicles hanging from the roofs are drying in the wind. The Moon is getting colder as day gives way to night; one owl's ruffled plumage: a rest for lunar light. From chimneys rise the wintry scents of burning firewood, keeping warm the occupants of a sleepy neighbourhood. The oak and beech quiescent, all the ash and hazel too. Dormant in the twilight of a year that's almost through. The solid ground is sparkling, the crispy grass is full of stars. This winter's fallen leaves wear delicate coats of frosted glass. So little sound is in the air, you can almost hear the cold.. With the gentle caressing of the wind upon a peaceful world. Underneath the icy Moon, in its bitter, twinkling night, the owl spreads her silent wings and takes to silver flight.

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Date: 2/26/2023 2:47:00 PM
Love this Sarah, really nicely written and you've painted the scene perfectly.
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Sara Jolly
Date: 2/27/2023 12:26:00 PM
Thanks, Stephen! :) I really wanted the reader to almost be able to feel the cosy, chilly, sparkle of winter as they read this.
Date: 8/31/2022 6:36:00 PM
Lovely the picture you paint, I enjoyed it thank you.
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Sara Jolly
Date: 9/1/2022 1:55:00 PM
Thanks, Les. I'm glad you enjoyed. :)
Date: 3/9/2022 4:56:00 AM
Enjoyed another one of your pieces. My favorite phrase beyond the super title/first line is "a rest for lunar light." Of course, "So little sound is in the air, you can almost hear the cold." is another great phrase to pen the quietness of your theme. Loved it, Sara.
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Sara Jolly
Date: 7/20/2022 11:37:00 AM
Aww, thank you so much! 'A rest for luna light' is one of my favourite lines too. :) I had a lot of fun writing this poem, imagining the feel of winter and thinking about how to describe it in ways that the reader would hopefully be able to feel it too. I really appreciate your comment, thank you. :)

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