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Behind the Clouds

Behind the Clouds Is that your face I see in the clouds Wearing a sapphire-studded crown Soft winds usher changing formation Each passing breeze, new revelation A prince’s sad frown turns upside down A joyful smile, witnessed from the ground Only for a moment it endures But I won’t forget that smile of yours My head to pillow, it recreates And wondrous dreams your smile generates Some people say the mind is a maze Yours is amazing; interest you raise Such qualities are not found in clouds I settle for smiles when nature allows

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Date: 2/2/2019 11:26:00 PM
yeah, amazing writing- Some people say the mind is a maze// beautiful poem
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Date: 1/29/2019 2:17:00 PM
Such a beautiful piece Carolyn, expertly penned with nice imagery.
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Date: 1/27/2019 11:25:00 AM
Lovely words. Congrats. :) Sunita
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Date: 7/21/2011 1:28:00 PM
glistening impressions from the heart, carols.. miles of congrats on a well deserved award! :)huggs!
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Date: 7/21/2011 1:22:00 PM
Very lovely Carolyn. Nice to find you at the top where you always belong. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/21/2011 9:09:00 AM
Carolyn, Beautiful Couplet Good to see you in the top spot. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/21/2011 7:17:00 AM
The last line sums up this joyful poem with hope! Well done,, Congratulations dear Carolyn!
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Date: 7/21/2011 6:46:00 AM
Stunning write Carolyn, I especially love your last couplet :) Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this beauty, lfde Wilma
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Date: 7/21/2011 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/5/2011 12:45:00 PM
Very sweet indeed - have you ever met one another? I hope you will soon, if not. And you can do a spot of Nessie hunting together on the shores of Loch Ness! Yes, I'd love to write with you : )
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Date: 11/16/2010 8:02:00 PM
Sweet poem for james, Carolyn. Very imaginative this one is! Glad you enjoyed my Blossoms on the snow. just a made up tale. I have never had a sad Christmas.just some boring ones. haha. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/16/2010 7:14:00 AM
wow i loved this poem it waas beautiful! i love the whole maze amazing thing, maybe i will tell my hubby that later (just kidding) great write and i especially enjoyed this one and i have read about 6 of them so far. =)jo
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Date: 1/26/2010 11:35:00 PM
Did you ever meet your favorite Highlander? A very well written couplet and dedication to him. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your great comments on my poems today. Best to you. Love and happiness, Caroline.
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Date: 12/9/2009 8:21:00 AM
Just Beautiful bravo love Jayne
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Date: 11/7/2009 6:44:00 AM
Beautiful flowing poem, Carolyn, and quite intense... that Highlander fellow has touched many of us here on the Soup.. his essence is very special as is yours with creativity... many more great poems still to come from u both... happy u have both taken me "under your wing" to help me along with my indoctrination process... hope I get an "A" plus ..from u and James.. have a wonderful weekend..Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetie"
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Date: 10/27/2009 4:32:00 PM
A very dedicated piece, Carolyn. "Such qualities are not found in clouds" so right you are with this. Thank you for all your hearty comments. Love, Gert
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Date: 10/27/2009 1:34:00 PM
What a beautiful dedication to Highlander! How in the world did this one ever get by me? I feel like I've read it before, hmmmm, smile.I must have read it and didn't comment on it right away. Doorbell or something... Your words are very heartfelt and touching dear Carolyn. I hope the two of you meet face to face real soon. The way you write poetry together is just amazing. Sending good thoughts your way, smile. Take care hun. Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/26/2009 11:43:00 PM
a very heartfelt dedication,a beautifully written piece from your heart,I read this one before and i thought I left a reply,,but guess not,,,sorry,,anyway it is always a pleasure and delight to read you and i look forward to your words on mine and Thank you so very much for the words that you leave after reading mine,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 10/16/2009 2:02:00 PM
In my mind, I've gone places my feet couldn't touch presently. Poetry is a map into the world, I always say in my class. Thanx Carolyn; yours is a pair of observant eyes, sensitive mind & great brain.
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Date: 10/15/2009 5:46:00 PM
Thanks on Tombstone, it was just a silly poem, O am not planning on going anywhere any time soon....and I don't die to good anyway..Danny
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Date: 10/13/2009 2:03:00 PM
Impressive write, you say a lot here...Thanks on Heading South I live in Arizona, only seen them one time...was hauling a load of horses from NM to Penn, saw them in South Daklota one afternoon...and impressive sight..with out a map they know where to go....Danny
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Date: 10/11/2009 9:22:00 AM
beautiful Car,,wonderful tribute to one o the best poets,your fav poet:)Charma
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Date: 10/9/2009 6:44:00 PM
This is an awesome Poem! Thank you so much for commenting on my work. As your's does mine comes from the heart also. Your work is awesome.
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Date: 10/8/2009 12:17:00 PM
touching and cute, good job!
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Date: 10/8/2009 10:14:00 AM
Nice Flow Great Read .....!
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