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Behind the Bike Shed

How could I forget this, behind the bike shed... my first kiss. Entry for My Most Unforgettable Moment in High School Poetry Contest Sponsored by JCB Burl. 7/9/2020

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Eve Roper

Date: 9/9/2020 11:35:00 AM

Good one, Gary. Congratulations on your first-place win.

Gary Smith
Date: 9/9/2020 11:43:00 AM

Thank you Eve. :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/9/2020 9:56:00 AM

That’s most certainly memorable. Congrats.

Gary Smith
Date: 9/9/2020 11:05:00 AM

Thank you Richard. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/9/2020 2:57:00 AM

- SWEEET .... moment ... :) - Congratulations on your win, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Smith
Date: 9/9/2020 2:59:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise. :)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/7/2020 10:05:00 AM

Never something you forget....wonderful monoku.

Gary Smith
Date: 9/7/2020 11:07:00 AM

Thank you Jeanne. :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/7/2020 7:18:00 AM

Bravo ~ the internal rhyme is most effective. Who cannot relate!? Totally charming ~

Gary Smith
Date: 9/7/2020 7:20:00 AM

Thank you Line. :)