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Begone From Me

A thorn you are in my side; contempt for you I must struggle to hide; my confidence in you will not abide; you confer with my foes like the in and outgoing tide; though, I wish you well as long as your distance becomes wide. (P.S.--just in case 10 lines or under was intended, if not disregard the poem P.D.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/22/2014 2:43:00 PM
This is originally crafted and says so much.Ouch that thorn how it hurts and so wise to.keep it distant-Excellent thoughts penned.Tnks for reading my humble verse.
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Date: 6/20/2014 6:02:00 PM
Debra, Congratulations, awesome breaking up poem....... SKAT
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Date: 6/20/2014 7:02:00 AM
Well Done :) Pluck that thorn from your side and let the puncture heal. grats on your rank in the contest, what a fun theme :)
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Date: 6/19/2014 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations, Debra, on a well-deserved, big win! Excellent, clever write that I thoroughly enjoyed! Warm regards.
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Date: 6/19/2014 6:50:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest, Debra
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Date: 6/19/2014 1:09:00 AM
Hello Debra, love it.. Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA
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