Before the Storm

Still, still no breeze- summer stays, with al fresco days

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/23/2009 5:56:00 AM

I am still familiarizing myself with the many forms of poetry .. thankxxx for your critique on my Salvation poem.. it was originally written as a song... I luv the Before the Storm poem ... says much in a few as your descriptive ways are awesome.. Linda-Marie

Elaine George

Date: 10/2/2009 6:47:00 PM

I wish! summer never really arrived here in southern Ontario this year. Rain and cool temperatures. Still over-cast and raining with even cooler temperatures.

Adell Foster

Date: 10/2/2009 6:34:00 AM

Brian you have painted a very lovely picture with the well chosen words of this fib. I thank you for sharing the read. God Bless, Always, Adell

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/1/2009 3:14:00 PM

I see the yellow-tinge to the sky in this write!... jim

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/1/2009 8:20:00 AM

What a creative thought -- "al fresco days," Brian. Even though summer "stays" more months in Florida, there always seems to be a stillness before bad weather approaches. Very realistic and creative write, Brian! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman

Date: 10/1/2009 7:50:00 AM

I sence the quite before a storm, such as a tornado, in your Fibonacci, Brian. Smile! I was re-reading some old comments, and came accross one of your's on " My Heavenly Granddaughter " poem, in which you said you had written a similar verse abour your own granddaughters. I have looked for it but don't see it, and woulld like to read it. Thanks for your gracious comment on my poem, today, Sincerely Moses

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/1/2009 5:07:00 AM

I can feel the stillness. Keep writing. Sara

James Peranteau

Date: 10/1/2009 3:17:00 AM

Brian,...thank you for sharing your artistic achievements with me,....I did root thru your portfolio,...art flows through you Sir,...great write here as well ! ty again ! james

Madeleine Mclaughlin

Date: 10/1/2009 1:37:00 AM

This is quite fine, a real treat of a poem, a lovely lyrical piece.