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Before the Rain Sets In

“You may say that I’m a dreamer”, With bold presumption in my youth Beyond school age, but hardly saged Turned loose, we hoped to use our wits to change the world… And thought we would…and thought we could… We declared to fight, what seemed so right Those days as we leaned so hard against the wind The plight of man’s predicament on earth, we mused The breeze just caught our spouted words And tossed them where it would We feared our crystal world would splinter Would shatter without our spin... "Never knowing who to cling to, when the rain set in” But that was then… So naively in such innocence Thinking we could see a world at peace Hoping to make our dreams come alive From thoughts we shaped on winsome days Imagining, ….if you please "It doesn't have to be that way!" And now with logic’s eyes, I do remember How changeless is a planet Glimmering in search of answers And still not wringing answers from the slightest sound And words we spoke, with vigorous shape Our hopes expressed, still looks for guidance… Are uttered yet, by other voices… “My words like silent raindrops fell, and echoed in the wells of silence” Lyrics From John Lennon “Beatles” Elton John Jim Croce’ Simon and Garfunkle For Chris Matt's ---'Contest Favorite Songs and Lyrics'

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Date: 11/2/2011 12:34:00 AM
Ah, songs of the sixties and seventies. How the world changes especially after we start living for someone other than ourselves.
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Date: 6/3/2011 6:13:00 PM
Sad memories, hard to realize we seems to have so little affect against the tides of war. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/3/2011 11:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Chris Matt's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/3/2011 10:33:00 AM
Dear Carrie, so glad to see your poem winning. Congratulations! I just got home from my fishing trip and have a lot to do, but hope to post a blog later today announcing the winners of my contest and include some fishing photos. Had a blast! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/3/2011 6:28:00 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of Chris Matt, carrie
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Date: 6/3/2011 1:09:00 AM
Really happy to see your name in the winners' list Carrie :) This was a wonderful take on these song lyrics :) Super congrats on your win :D
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Date: 6/2/2011 8:23:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!!! really great win for you,.... ^_^ **jun-jun
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Date: 5/11/2011 11:42:00 AM
Wow, Carrie, you picked some of my favorite songs (and artists) to write this amazing poem. They all fit together so well. I got chills when I saw the first line. I "Imagine" John Lennon would have had the same reaction to your entire poem. Awesome poem for my faves! Love and best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
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Date: 5/11/2011 1:40:00 AM
You sure stepped up to the challenge so well with this, Carrie! I really like how you tied these lyrics together (I am unfamiliar with the third one you used, sorry..) and wrote such a thought provoking piece-- beautiful work as always Carrie-- and let me greet you a belated happy Mother's Day-- super hugs to you! :)
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Date: 5/10/2011 1:40:00 PM
I enjoyed your refreshing your memories of the past melodies though I am not familiar with any, carrie
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Date: 5/9/2011 9:28:00 PM
Brilliant songs and artists Carrie for this poem for the contest ..good luck .. many memories of each song noted .. all very good ones luv..
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