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Before the Rain

shadows and doubts cloud skies birds and angels hide I cry alone bearing heavy thoughts before the rain thoughts heavy bearing alone cry I hide angels and birds skies cloud doubts and shadows

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Ralph Sergi

Date: 6/17/2015 7:55:00 AM

Hi Mike: Great style of poetry. I enjoyed it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2015 4:53:00 PM

Hey I seem to recall a form like this from the past. Mirror? something like that. It really works well!!

Mike Bayles
Date: 6/23/2015 1:58:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. The poetic form is called palindrome.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/16/2015 2:12:00 PM

This is wonderful and creative, Mike! I love the mirror form...I'll have to try one of these...hugs, Rhonda