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Before the Paling Stars: Poet's Pluck Premiere Contest Winner

Eleven titles plucked from the exquisite poetry of Christina Rossetti For my sweet child, petite Maude Clare, Before The Paling of The Stars, I grieve for my infant with head of flaxen curls. I pray, Lord, save this tiny Daughter of Eve. Tears fill my red and swollen eyes when her Daddy, asks, "Is It Well With The Child?" God, protect one of Your Holy Innocents. As her fever climbs, my racing heart runs wild. From Sunset To Star Rise, I hold her near. Her hand clasps one of my trembling fingers while she clings to The Thread of Life. Sleeping At Last, but the fever lingers. She fitfully stirs in the crook of my arm. My voice in lullaby, tearfully sings. I press a kiss to her warm pink cheek, her eyelids quiver, like little Fluttered Wings. By morning, In The Willow Shade, we rest. Fever broken and Maude is in Dream Land. At my breast, she sleeps and all is well. Thank You, dear God, for holding out Your hand. February 10, 2017 The Poets Pluck contest of Mystic Rose

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Date: 3/10/2017 6:37:00 AM
Congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/23/2017 9:08:00 PM
Astounding!!!
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Date: 2/23/2017 6:06:00 PM
Congratulations, Marti, and HOW are you?
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Date: 2/23/2017 6:48:00 AM
Excellent, Marti. Well deserved top place, congratulations. // Barry
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Date: 2/22/2017 11:04:00 PM
This is worthy of the win, dear Marti, touched the heart:) congratulations:)
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Date: 2/22/2017 7:51:00 PM
Nice use of Christina Rosetti's titles! Congrats, Marti!
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Date: 2/22/2017 2:44:00 PM
Long time, no read or even encounter you except in my wonderments. So happy to know that you and your talent are indeed still available to me and others. This touching poem was skillfully meshed with your chosen poem titles, and very moving. Congratulations to me for finding you, I mean for your great placement in the contest! Poetry hugs and love ... CayCay
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Date: 2/22/2017 2:08:00 PM
Congrats on the winning poem, this was fantastic.
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Date: 2/22/2017 1:07:00 PM
great work Marti, congratulations, well deserved...
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Date: 2/22/2017 12:55:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Marti - what a wonderful poem! The titles seemlessly mesh with your narrative, well done!
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Date: 2/22/2017 12:37:00 PM
Many congrats Marti I am absolutely delighted for you:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/22/2017 12:35:00 PM
Absolutely brilliant Marti, congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 2/12/2017 7:01:00 PM
wow, you did such an awesome job of this, Marti. It reminds me of how I did mine (not posted yet) I too used a lot of titles from a very great poet named Sara Teasdale. I sincerely hope this one wins and thanks for being a smart lady who understands what the dump trump is doing to our nation.
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Date: 2/10/2017 3:39:00 PM
Should have named a prayer of some sort, Marti. Just beautiful:)
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Date: 2/10/2017 3:05:00 PM
You wove the titles in so wonderfully Marti good luck in the contest - I could weave titles of my own poems into mine but I guess that's not gonna win lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2017 4:34:00 PM
ha ha ha infamous on poop poems lol:-) hugs Jan xx

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