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Before the Gates of Alahsar - Original Version - 3

3. The great golden gates now are opening, the Dark Man never does look behind, as he hears footsteps softly approaching, help does come from his rear. Looking down to his right side, the Tigress she is standing there, sword in hand, golden hair a-flying around Angel face with stern aspect. Such a look never seen before but look seen in tournaments, the look of thoughtful battle passion, as real in life, as is in dream. Now the Dark Man to the ground slips, standing by a warrior queen, soft, dark eyes, now filled with passion, They do look upon a deathly scene. Algahrs over the field advancing, Earth is shaking, power and might, fleet of foot, horror nearer, forward come the hoards of Death. Shaking not, Angelic beauty, standing by the man of dark, ready for to do their duty, Fury now burns within the heart. Yet not alone these two would stand, not for long two shadows there, golden gates are opening wide, comes forth mortal tide to live or die. Remembering bloody Badicha, mortals they have come again, Revenge coming for to find, Blood fury in all consuming mind. Now battle formation meets battle formation, man and beast at deadly odds again, Sword and spear, resounding thunder, lightning flashes, fury wakes. Hopes of life ever long remembered, the mortals their duty to do, fighting for the world of dreamers, Love's own wishes to come true. Onward into fateful vision, dark and Angel side by side, dealing out the light's destruction, For all, there is no where to hide. Mortal blows do rend the foe, forward banners, high and low, new death upon Badicha's plain, victory or defeat, the judgement waits. Turvehr, the black unicorn, he did kick with feet and toss with horn, the eyes afire with hate's desire, remembrances of ancient wrongs. Destroyer of the Algahr fire To rend asunder was his work this day, heart a-fire, hatred to nourish, to kick and toss, to bloodily slay. Angry Unicorn did buck awaY, upon this battleground his victims still, Anger with such majesty, the glory of a bloody dawn. Women, they cried out in fear, whenever danger came to near, for love indeed this day was born for Turvehr, the king Unicorn. To Be Continued..........

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Date: 4/10/2019 6:53:00 PM
I really like this version more because the Queen and Unicorn are more clearly defined in your vivid imagery Mike. Which version do you prefer? All are marvelous though. I hope you are well.Easter blessings my friend. xxoo
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Date: 3/11/2019 11:21:00 AM
I would like to thank all those who drop by to view this piece. Your visits help a poet to keep singing. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 3/10/2019 7:02:00 AM
I love your brilliant poetry and stories. Your continuous tales keep all us readers captivated. I hope all is well with you, Mike. Keep your pen filled and flowing my dear friend. All the very best always...Your friend Charlie
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Date: 3/24/2019 11:58:00 AM
Hi Charles, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I am enjoying posting this first version of the write. Hopefully, this new laptop shall keep me posting more. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 3/8/2019 12:56:00 PM
Your imagination soars with all your poems Mike - they have a feel of yester year - you master your words and verses to produce a poem of real beauty. Well done Mike - true talent here. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/24/2019 11:47:00 AM
Hi Jennifer, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece, This is the shorter, 1st version of Alahsar. I have enjoyed writing each version. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 3/8/2019 12:37:00 PM
A great legendary narrative ballad style wow. Interesting classic story poem indeed. Kudos. Nice to read from u again, plz do comment my newest poem too.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/24/2019 11:34:00 AM
Hi Zaynab, sorry it has taken a while to get back to you, I had to wait to get the new laptop. Thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am enjoying posting the short, 1st version of Alahsar. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 3/7/2019 5:38:00 PM
A master story teller, a treat to read.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/11/2019 12:16:00 PM
Hi Richard, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. The battle for the land of dream is begun. I am so enjoying posting this original version of Alahsar. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 3/6/2019 1:45:00 PM
Many believe that the unicorn was real and not just myth. Your poem is so intriguing and a compelling read that I await reading the next continuation Mike. Bravo! : ) xxoo
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Date: 3/11/2019 12:06:00 PM
Hi Connie, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I am enjoying posting this version of Alahsar. The battle for Alahsar, the world of dream, is now begun. I wouldn't be wanting to face those Arlghs for real. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 3/3/2019 12:22:00 PM
Great imagery in your work Mike, you write these so well, I always get images of the mythical world of castles, dragons and heroes with swords. Hope your well. Tom.
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Date: 3/11/2019 11:42:00 AM
Hi Tom, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. My mind so often goes back to Antiquity. I do think I was meant to live in a time long since gone. I am enjoying posting this version of Alahsar. Have a wonderful Monday. your friend always....Mike.

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