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Before the Gate

intelligence over the innocence with dishonesty plays game of gain where the present world is going is it not that is of the hell? with the selfish mantras of cheating earning future hardest biff If words of Jesus is not obeyed before the afar gate all such will be punished

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/25/2013 10:30:00 AM

Very true, my dear....Lovely write...He is willing to foegive if we but ask.....

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/25/2013 12:26:00 PM

Yes, lovely comment. Loved always, bl

Skat A

Date: 10/25/2013 10:29:00 AM

wow! such a provoking thought. I wish to be free from all my sins before i arrive... enjoyed..SKAT

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/25/2013 12:25:00 PM

A lot of thanks always............. Loved always, bl

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/24/2013 5:46:00 PM

Jesus is living and ready to forgive all who come to him. What an amazing God we have, the guilty declared innocent.

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/25/2013 7:44:00 AM

Thanks for reading my write and for your comment, my poet friend. Loved always, bl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/24/2013 3:05:00 PM

Got that one correct..Enjoyed reading your faith based work..Your comments 'pon my work are appreciated..Sara

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/24/2013 3:12:00 PM

Huge thanks for your comment, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl