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Before The Day Turned Into Night

Before the day turned into night The shadows danced and stalked the light The moon withheld, stayed out of sight Then took its lone, nocturnal flight Beyond horizons studded stars Came into view above, afar – They slowly crept from reaches far – I thought to meet them where they are, But they are of the night, not day And are remote and far away And like so many things today They dwell in darkness, where they stay, Elusive in their cosmic light As day turns slowly into night –

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Date: 3/21/2024 12:53:00 AM
This is a really beautiful poem John. It’s so captivating from start to finish. ‘ The shadows danced and stalked the light’ they dwell in darkness, where they stay’. So expressive. Your artistic words draw the reader in as the day finally takes her leave. You capture so much with your exquisite words. What an amazing, skilled poet you are. Loved reading this. Thank you.
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John Oldham
Date: 3/23/2024 5:47:00 AM
Many thanks, Christina! I was hoping my spin on this topic would resonate. Best -
Date: 3/20/2024 6:48:00 PM
Wow, a fav for me! Actually I love most of your work.
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John Oldham
Date: 3/23/2024 5:45:00 AM
Thanks for being a fan, Paige! Appreciate you :)

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