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Before the City Wakes

Come, walk with me in this early dawn while the darkness fades in solitude As first light appears, and moon drifts on we will drink in the quiet interlude Wet blankets of fog will lift away wearing soft slippers of slow retreat We'll greet early risers starting the day drink fresh brewed coffee, and stroll the streets The beat, the strand of sidewalk noise Gains timbre as the traffic mocks Once more the world regards it's toys Of cars, and horns, and ticking clocks Before the bustling city quakes Let's stroll before the monster wakes
-------------------------------------------------------------- 6/18/16 For Contest: Sounds of the Day Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/28/2016 7:46:00 PM
I adore this. Thank you for sharing. W
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Date: 7/11/2016 9:14:00 PM
This was just wonderful, I am really enjoying reading you, you are one of the best writers on here! Seriously this is good! A7
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Date: 7/10/2016 8:51:00 AM
A delightful early morning read. Loved this piece. Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 6/22/2016 7:31:00 AM
A gorgeous piece.
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Date: 6/21/2016 3:33:00 PM
A 7 for this lovely poem--especially the couplet. Janice
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Date: 6/21/2016 5:27:00 AM
I like this - "drink in the quiet interlude" "Before the bustling city quakes":) Congratulations on your win, Carrie:)
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Date: 6/20/2016 3:31:00 PM
ahh, yours was somewhat like mine, a sonnet dealing with contrasts. Wonderful win. Congrats.
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Date: 6/20/2016 2:46:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie on the placement of the contest
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Date: 6/20/2016 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Carrie, I love the way you call the confusion of the day a monster wakes
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Date: 6/20/2016 12:54:00 PM
Great last couplet Carrie, the finishing brushstroke to a vibrant painting.
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Date: 6/20/2016 9:27:00 AM
Beautiful write!
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Date: 6/18/2016 4:49:00 PM
lovely sonnet Carrie - the final couplet brought a smile to my face:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/18/2016 3:27:00 PM
Great Sonnet, Carrie. Lovely flow and rhythm. Good luck for the contest. Barry
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Date: 6/18/2016 3:04:00 PM
Now this is poetry! What a beautifully written Sonnet.
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