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Before Love Struck

When love was innocent you would kiss me and that kiss would provide sparks that kiss would make my entire world stop and for that brief second you were my world you were the crisp air i would breath not now... when love was innocent your touch your touch would inscription against my skin my body would shiver with great sensation my eyes would flutter with pleasure not now... when our love was innocent we would go to the fair hands in locked together id be in my white top and baby blue jeans you with your pushed back hair and sunglasses not a care in the world because we were together not now... when our love was innocent our kiss ment something when our love was innocent your touch mattered when i was innocent i wore white now i wear black

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Date: 5/6/2016 10:34:00 PM
ABIGAIL, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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Date: 4/26/2016 4:44:00 PM
abigail crouch, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/30/2015 5:36:00 PM
The title you gave to this heart wound truly reveals the total nature and grief that love ruthlessly imparts in souls after the warmth of innocence pours down upon our senses with cold fate Abigail. "Your touch would inscription against my skin..." genuine, brilliant sensuality! The style of this poem carries great emotion and life tempo too! I must FAV. this painful passion Abigail...J.A.B.
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Date: 5/28/2015 5:31:00 AM
Charming and beautiful write though with a sad ending. Deserves the win. A 7 . Congratulations! My bad for being so late. Still catching up with my reading. Kim
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Date: 5/19/2015 4:54:00 PM
Congrats on your top finish Abigail:) A truly beautiful poem xxFaaiqah
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Date: 5/19/2015 4:39:00 PM
Great result here Abigail..'
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Date: 5/19/2015 9:48:00 AM
Exceptional!
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Date: 5/19/2015 9:23:00 AM
Abigail, Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day. SKAT
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Date: 5/19/2015 8:32:00 AM
Abigail this a wonderfully written and emotion filled tear shed for lost innocence. Congrats on the high placement it is well deserved.
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