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Before Every Dream

Most night I spend them counting, in thoughts Like being trap inside a cocoon; it’s dark and quiet It’s a little daunting It’s why I always have my eyes closed But, I could still see everything, as light as day A little like the sun but calmer like the grin of the moon Starry like the pebbles in the ocean floor, twinkling Feeling a little cold like ice but burns like red pepper in my mouth Although, soft to my skin, giggly like bubbles, underwater I’m not drowning but more like flying, upside down Nimble as a feather It tethers like footsteps, one after the other It gets bigger, growing far, so fast-upward Like looking at a mirror from the inside Distorted like cartoons But real like a stomach ache Not so much as painful as it is stimulating Like a giant, tying a roller coaster, into knot Roaring like thunder, continuously It doesn’t stop I didn’t want it to stop Because it was sensibly addicting In a good way Like listening to a joke for the first time Knowing, that you actually got the point And the point is very inspiring like firecrackers Pop, pop, pop And this is when I open my eyes… By: Wilbert Dela Cruz

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/30/2015 6:24:00 PM
Nice win///DP
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Date: 6/28/2015 12:24:00 AM
Wilbert, Congrats on the fantasy win...... SKAT
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Date: 6/27/2015 9:26:00 AM
Wilbert, this is indeed a winner - congratulations! With its incredible imagery, I enjoyed reading this piece and rate it a 7. Warmest regards. Pandita
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