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Inspired by the comment Miranda Hawley made to my "After a Storm". Thank you Miranda!

 

The day before a storm belies calm and quiet, wispy clouds bounce in skies bright with boundless blueness, Southern summer surprise. The day before a storm promotes a sweet fragrance blown by light, gentle gusts, softly scampering through with breathy upward thrusts. The day before a storm imprints the Southern sky, a taunting, teasing wind caresses blank canvas and moves colors to blend. The day before a storm rattles ironclad glaives of battling stratus clouds, a lull looms in the air warning of what it shrouds.

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Date: 1/21/2024 10:31:00 AM
Well the whole of southern and south west England being hit by a storm we are expecting 90 mph gusts, I don't suppose London will cime Off too bad as there is so much infrastructure In the other areas I should think there will be Lots of damage, as things tend to be rather Creaky, what with everything being overpriced Yesterday was the calm before Linda-Alice.' Which caused me to check out this well done write..'
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/22/2024 9:54:00 AM
Hi Joe. Hope you survived the dreary weather. 90mph gusts is huge! Thank you for visiting me my dear friend, and for your kind comments. :).
Date: 1/18/2024 6:58:00 PM
A delightful Monchielle Laf. I can not only see but feel that teasing Taunting wind ! A wonderful descriptive poem. A fave for me .
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/19/2024 8:44:00 AM
Hello my dear Svvie. So good to hear your voice! I am delighted for the fav and so pleased that you liked this poem. :)
Date: 1/12/2024 7:21:00 PM
Your vocabulary days and imagerry, take me back to mine…earlier in Chicago. Where I live now we really have storms. I in no way miss them, though Elena does. I really like this poem! Pangie
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/18/2024 10:31:00 AM
Hi dear Pangie. I do love to watch our Texas storms. Thanks for liking my work. :)
Date: 1/8/2024 2:31:00 AM
I think the whole of Britain has come to realise this. Times sure are changing, and I suppose we'll just have to get used to it.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/8/2024 7:15:00 AM
;);). Thanks for stopping by Paul. :)
Date: 1/7/2024 2:11:00 PM
I enjoyed this creative "Before The Storm" write. I can see it... Have a great/blessed week...............
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/7/2024 2:40:00 PM
Thank you dear Paula. You as well :)
Date: 1/5/2024 4:27:00 PM
I like your approach here. The day before... everything calm. Then it happens, sometimes to the point of calamity. Yet, who knew it was coming. It reminds me of this Bible verse - Ecclesiastes 9:11
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/7/2024 7:04:00 AM
Hello Tom. Thank you for visiting and commenting. Yes, I recall the verse. :)
Date: 1/5/2024 4:17:00 PM
You did a fantastic job. I agree with your thoughts on day before a storm and how calm the sky actually is! Great write. Your welcome and I am glad I inspired a great write for you!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/7/2024 7:03:00 AM
Many thanks Miranda, on many levels ;) Good to see you! :)
Date: 1/5/2024 3:32:00 PM
I found your poem captivating with your spot on descriptions of 'before a storm.' We have lots of storms here in Texas in the spring and again in the fall...what you've described does occur the day before. I loved 'battling stratus clouds.' Just well done, Linda. Have a splendid weekend, hugs, Sara
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/7/2024 7:03:00 AM
Being a native Texan, the storms here are the ones with which I am most familiar. Many thanks Sara dear. Have a love-filled and fun-filled weekend! :)

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