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Bees Knees

You’re the bee’s knees between my knees. Sweet as nectar, Tart like blood. A wolf in sheep’s clothing Shopping for sheep, Shopping for mercy, Shopping for me. To the naked eye You’re just fine But to the naked touch Your skins too rough. Your eyes too beady. You’ve lost your touch. The lone wolf in sheep’s clothing Losing his meaning.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/20/2013 7:51:00 PM
congratulations on your featured poem of the week ;}
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Date: 11/27/2012 9:28:00 PM
Ira, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Keep the good verses coming... take care & good night :-) PD
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Ira Dawson
Date: 11/29/2012 5:54:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 11/15/2012 10:33:00 AM
Ira, welcome you to the P-Soup. - I've read all your poems .... and you write very well. - Hope you'll have great pleasure to share your poems here with us. - Wish you luck. - Give comments and get comments. - Have a nice day Ira. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/14/2012 2:30:00 PM
Interesting work..Sara
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Ira Dawson
Date: 11/14/2012 2:49:00 PM
Thank you!

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