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Bees Premiere Contest Winner

I used to see bees as a threat to me, then I grew a fresh garden of my own- I planted a precious mulberry tree, and those cute lil’ honey bees found a home. They spread pollen to a third of our food, and collect nectar which becomes honey- Without them we’d have no veggies or fruit, like a sky without breeze, never sunny. Oh, sweet honey bees- may you take delight, make drifts of waves when you spread energy- As you use your antenna to take flight, may your hive always be full of honey. Fuzzy bees may sting while feeling attacked, but without their vigor, food we would lack. Words Used: antenna, waves, sky, breeze, nectar, and pollen Bees Contest Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton Date Written: September 28, 2016

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Date: 1/13/2018 9:16:00 AM
Laura, this is beautiful and congratulations on your awesome win. I have sent you a soupmail about our collaboration, it is not acceptable for the contest as we had to pick a image you posted on the contest to write about.
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Date: 10/3/2016 3:37:00 PM
Nicely done, congratulations!
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Date: 10/1/2016 4:33:00 PM
Great job! Congrats! JE
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Date: 9/30/2016 10:48:00 PM
Hi Laura, You have penned a well written informational write.Bees are very important. Congratulations on your trophy win. It was well deserved. A Big seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/30/2016 1:08:00 AM
Very cute write highlighting the importance of bees:) congratulations on your top win, Laura:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/30/2016 2:09:00 PM
thank you lovely Jo :)-luloo
Date: 9/30/2016 12:32:00 AM
Beautiful praise of our little honey bees! Congrats on your 1st place. X]
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/30/2016 2:08:00 PM
thank you sweet Sunita :)-luloo
Date: 9/29/2016 10:17:00 PM
Congrats Laura to win top place on your nice piece. Hugs.
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/30/2016 2:08:00 PM
thank you sweet Anisha :)-luloo
Date: 9/29/2016 8:49:00 PM
awww,you did yours SO sweet, Laura. BIG congrats on a big win.
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Date: 9/30/2016 2:07:00 PM
thank you lovely Andrea :)-luloo
Date: 9/29/2016 8:39:00 PM
Congratulations LuLoo, well done...
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Date: 9/30/2016 2:07:00 PM
thank you Charlie :)-luloo
Date: 9/29/2016 8:32:00 PM
Big congrats on your top win Laura
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/30/2016 2:06:00 PM
thank you sweet Joseph :)-luloo
Date: 9/29/2016 5:11:00 PM
Luloo, Congratulations on your trophy win with this lovely sonnet. This was a good job.
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/29/2016 6:22:00 PM
thank you sweet Janis :)-luloo
Date: 9/29/2016 3:31:00 PM
Laura, wow, you got a trophy, a big CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful win with this beautifully penned poem ~
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/29/2016 6:22:00 PM
thank you sweet Broken Wings :)-luloo
Date: 9/29/2016 3:06:00 PM
Congrats you're poem well deserved 1st x
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Date: 9/29/2016 6:22:00 PM
thank you sweet Wendy :)-luloo
Date: 9/29/2016 2:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Laura, great write :-) Hugs
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Date: 9/29/2016 6:21:00 PM
thank you lovely Eve :)-luloo
Date: 9/29/2016 12:15:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your First Place Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/29/2016 1:18:00 PM
many thanks sweet Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 9/29/2016 11:57:00 AM
WOW!!!! sweet write sweet as honey!congrats dear Luloo on your great win!!.....love, Anu:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/29/2016 1:18:00 PM
thank you lovely Anulaxmi :)-luloo
Date: 9/29/2016 11:54:00 AM
Luloo, this is lovely! Congrats on your top win!!
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Date: 9/29/2016 1:17:00 PM
thank you sweet Kim :)-luloo
Date: 9/29/2016 11:36:00 AM
Great take on theme Laura Bees are so precious congrats on 1st
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Date: 9/29/2016 1:17:00 PM
thank you so much Shadow! I am so grateful you like it! I wrote it at 3:00 am the other night! lol :)-luloo
Date: 9/28/2016 11:35:00 PM
I saw the title and was eager to see how you did YOUR bee poem. VERY Well done, Laura. Loved how you made a sweet sonnet of it.
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Date: 9/29/2016 1:16:00 PM
thank you lovely Andrea :)-luloo
Date: 9/28/2016 9:24:00 PM
Well-written meaningful sonnet, Luloo! Janice
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/29/2016 1:16:00 PM
thank you sweet Janice :)-luloo

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