Bees

BEES Haughty humming bees move antenna merrily with waves of mild breeze. Bees groan,freely fly around nice fresh flowers. under azure sky. Flowers smile to bloom welcoming bees to taste nectar in bosom. Bees can suck at ease. Pollen-dust on the stigma stick to legs of bees. Bees and breeze carry pollen to spread, scatter on flowers' ovary. Ovulation starts. yielding fruits with seeds inside. Plants lead life so smart. 09.27.16 Re-edited on 05/25/22 Bee Creative Contest byMatt Caliri

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Karam Misra

Date: 7/19/2022 12:17:00 AM

Bees do play a very important role in the propagation process! Beautiful description of pollination and the role played by the bees. Congratulations on your placement in the contest, Anisha.

Matt Caliri

Date: 7/17/2022 11:13:00 AM

Great job on placing 10 in my contest of 55 entries! Loved your poem structure.

Manmath Dalei

Date: 9/27/2016 10:10:00 AM

Dear Anisha, u penned well. All stanzas are in haiku format. I think it is a set of haikus. Anyway brilliant write..........//Manmath

Anisha Dutta
Date: 9/28/2016 1:52:00 AM

I have edited and made it a series of Haiku. Now check.

Manmath Dalei
Date: 9/27/2016 10:13:00 AM

Humming bees (2) within 5 syllable, move antenna(2) within 7 syllable, with waves of breeze (4) within 5 syllable, hence it is in 5-7-5 syllable, ok.