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Beautiful stripy bees are busily buzzing, they drift down in waves from the sky. Gently they sip nectar and spread pollen from the flowers, then off to their hives they will fly Their antenna guide them home, as they drift on a warm zephyr breeze. It’s a good job they don’t suffer from hay fever or the poor bees would constantly sneeze! Contest Bees Sponsored by Shadow Hamilton words required, antenna, waves, sky, breeze, nectar, and pollen 09~18~16

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Date: 9/24/2016 12:18:00 PM
A fun read. I loved the end.
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Date: 9/23/2016 3:13:00 AM
Feel like a honey mead now!!! Nice one.
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Date: 9/22/2016 2:47:00 PM
Utterly cute, jan. Sorry I am so behind on your poetry. I just can't keep up these days but on the weekend, i will see more! Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/19/2016 7:45:00 PM
Jan, this is just delightful, those lovely bees ~
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Date: 9/20/2016 2:16:00 AM
Thanks Constance I hope Shadow likes it - I write for fun and had to add a bit of humour at the end:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/19/2016 6:19:00 PM
A honey of a job! Thanks!
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Date: 9/19/2016 6:25:00 PM
:-) thanks Jack:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/19/2016 8:28:00 AM
Perfect.
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Date: 9/19/2016 5:09:00 PM
Thanks Jean I had fun writing this one:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/19/2016 3:01:00 AM
Love the simplicity of this poem Jan, yet the image of the bee is buzzing in my mind.
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Date: 9/19/2016 5:09:00 PM
Thanks Miraj:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/18/2016 8:53:00 PM
I like that, Good poem
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Date: 9/19/2016 5:10:00 PM
Thanks Gwen:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/18/2016 6:45:00 PM
Very descriptive poem with a twist of fun in there, Jan! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 9/19/2016 5:10:00 PM
Thanks Laura:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/18/2016 6:30:00 PM
ha! very cute and clever, jan! best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 9/19/2016 5:11:00 PM
Thanks Ilene:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/18/2016 5:18:00 PM
Nicely penned Jan...love the humor at the end ....GL in the contest....
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Date: 9/18/2016 5:20:00 PM
I just couldn't resist Joseph:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/18/2016 5:17:00 PM
Like many other of your poems, this one made me smile, Jan. Good luck for the contest. Agnes
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Date: 9/18/2016 5:19:00 PM
Thanks Agnes:-):-) I do try and raise a smile if I can:-) hugs Jan xx

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