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From a bottle to the body it settles drinking with no fear drunkenness is near views are mixed up As we turn to look up drinking with a smile difficulties while walking a mile tipsy , as I am about to fall but i cant give up a beer at all (to be continued)

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Date: 8/20/2009 6:16:00 AM
I am looking forward to the continuation of this piece...well done.
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Date: 8/20/2009 3:41:00 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
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