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Beelzebub Incognito

Sweetly cavalier rosy cheeks and eyes clear Intent gaze saying see and trust dear Chivvy up your pure skirts for a quick poke Promises betrothal but he's a joke The diabolic cloot, fiend to the end Laughs in your shame to abaddon would send The sparkling eyes and sweet deceiving smile Gave a demidevil surprise child vile Child of lust, incubus frets your dreaming Calculated evil, cruel living Walk like an angel, daimon incognito You're a booty call, his hot tomato Deceived, deceived, a sad sinner conceived Denied, beset yet salvation granted

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/14/2010 2:07:00 AM
Doris; I don't "do" negative. I love it! Thank you for commenting on my poem.
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Date: 11/13/2010 1:13:00 PM
Doris; Demonic!
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Date: 11/9/2010 7:38:00 PM
Quite interesting, Doris. And cool title you gave this one. Congrats on your win in this unique contest. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/9/2010 2:51:00 PM
Terrific Sonnet Doris, it sure deserves to be on the podium, go girl - more of this >> James :)
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Date: 11/9/2010 10:29:00 AM
Beautiful job on this one Doris, Congratulations on a poem's honor, Very Good. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/9/2010 5:05:00 AM
More congrats Doris for your HM in the devil made me do it contest with this wonderful entry luv.. great message here so now enjoy your special honor all your own today with luv..
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Date: 11/8/2010 7:12:00 PM
Well done> Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/3/2010 6:23:00 AM
Interesting! very interesting topic for the form & great whack um in the head ending! Huzzah! Light & Love
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Date: 10/31/2010 11:24:00 PM
Wow! I give you 7 pts for this one. Keep writing! Thank you for commenting on my poem. HJ
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Date: 10/30/2010 2:50:00 PM
Bad man cavalier,now I know what he looks like, fun reading, thanks :) Sheri
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Date: 10/29/2010 6:57:00 AM
Your last line!! O what sweet salvation! Undeserved, but lovingly granted. Doris, today you have reminded me of a reason to continually praise God. Thanks for taking the time to read me as well as comment. Be blessed today, in the name of the Lord. Joy (Jew)
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Date: 10/29/2010 5:24:00 AM
deceived,deceived,a sad sinner conceived denied,beset yet salvation granted.....what a power-package,only the man who has overpowered the devil can honestly comment about this work.u are too much Doris.
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Date: 10/28/2010 3:30:00 PM
Very daring write about the De__Vile..I am glad that I chose this one to read..Keep on writing..The copy of my poem in print came today..Mom
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