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Bedtime Stories

Dark trees hover over me. I’m left in the woods. Sounds and even owls, don’t lighten the mood. Lost with my map, I cry, I pant. Looking left and trying to find the right path. Somebody save me, there is something lurking behind me. It’s creeping and crawling and it’s right there! It surprised me. It grabs a hold of me tightly, and speaks into my ear. “ Goodnight my sweet darling, the morning will soon appear."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/6/2014 8:43:00 PM
what a cool take on being read a bedtime story!! Much enjoyed, Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/5/2014 1:37:00 PM
Beautiful! Congrats on the win!!!
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Date: 3/5/2014 7:28:00 AM
- Hello Elizabeth, congratulations on your nice winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/5/2014 7:10:00 AM
A classic! Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/5/2014 6:46:00 AM
Congrats on the worthy win Elizabeth.
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Date: 3/5/2014 5:23:00 AM
Lovely poem. Congratulations on the fine win, elizabeth
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Date: 3/1/2014 12:16:00 AM
Dear Elizabeth: Nice twist in last two lines. Leon
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