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Bedtime Magic

BEDTIME MAGIC Sprawled under nightscape of galaxy bright Tiny sequins pulse on blaze of luster, A beaded stars nova bursts on flight Into a full-blown montage, the lawns flicker Reams of tales climb on visions lit by dappled view While children’s breaths gleam of fantasy hayrides, And fairies jut out from chapters to touch the hue Yearning to blend into a ladder that divides The seashore from a skyline blushing streams; On one unmentionable lightness of firework glory Tinseled rhinestones kindle hopes of angelic dreams, Holding a cachet of flowered moon for bedtime story Enchanted, their mother blows a peppermint kiss Staring at gems waltzing high up on glittered air, Threads of her locks meshed by twinkles of lullaby bliss As graceful nebulae cuddle sweetened hours, ever fair Rounding her infants, wonders of night magic sigh Stars radiant dip into eyes; winking good night, goodbye! © ** * For Gautami Phookan's Sweetest Touches Of Verse By nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/13/2014 12:49:00 PM
amazing sweet acrostic Nette many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/13/2014 12:08:00 PM
Lovely crafted piece , nette, congrats on the win
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Date: 10/13/2014 11:36:00 AM
Congrats on your worthy win Nette.
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Date: 2/28/2012 3:59:00 PM
Super congratulations Nette on the win here.. (well done)
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Date: 2/27/2012 5:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Stairway To The Stars" contest Nette. Love Carol
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Date: 2/26/2012 8:15:00 AM
congrats nette with this gem cory
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Date: 2/26/2012 2:54:00 AM
Congratulations nette enjoyed it so much xx
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Date: 2/26/2012 1:02:00 AM
Congratulations Nette on your 2nd place win.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 2/22/2012 6:35:00 AM
WoW! A very descriptive and beautifully done piece. The imagery is great. Loved it. A sure winner. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/21/2012 9:43:00 PM
thankxx Nette luv for su[[orting my contest .. good luck luv .. am sure to be reading a rare beauty once again luv.. sweet..
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Date: 2/21/2012 3:59:00 PM
What a magnificent write this one is Nette! I love your extreme descriptions of nighttime magic that bring images of visions to my humble head! The kids within this poem are in for a merry treat with everything your have illustrated! I really enjoyed this poem this fine evening my friend! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/21/2012 3:09:00 PM
Sweet and soft poem nette...Bedtime Magic...good night to you to. luck in contest - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/21/2012 1:07:00 PM
nice...nice..good luck in the contest...pd
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Date: 2/21/2012 12:17:00 PM
Takes me to the stars and beyond Nette, you have an amazing repetoire of words to weave your magic in the poems you write and I never cease to be amazed at the brilliance that shines in each one. Love this and wish you all the best in the contest! :) Luv, Elizabeth
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Date: 2/21/2012 10:50:00 AM
Amazing poetry here NETTE.Love the imagery.Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 2/21/2012 9:46:00 AM
A lovely write Nette , best of luck in the contest , Hugs Declan xx
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Date: 2/21/2012 9:20:00 AM
Smile ˜ Sounds like Dorothy - Hahaha - So Sweet - Love, John!:) *
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