Bedtime

When I was five, bedtime was pretty cool At nine O clock I would go brush my teeth I got some goodnight hugs and kisses too Then it was "lights out little man, sweet dreams"

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2010 9:17:00 AM

I always hated bedtime. I only like it NOW becuause by the time I finally get to bed in my adult life (like after midnight or later) I am good and READY for it. haha. Nice thoughts here of a child. Oh, Mtch, aren't you kind of in my age group?? That is why I am astounded you never heard of doctor Kildaire! I have a hubbie who doesn't remember any songs from the era we grew up in!! I bet you remember lots of the songs. LUv, Andrea

Vrushani Thaker

Date: 7/19/2010 9:05:00 PM

How true!!!!! Good one dear!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/19/2010 8:08:00 PM

Mr. Sand Man give me dream.. Give a man,, one who cares not to brush his teeth...lol.. i do not know the song.,, i was not born in that era,,,Nice one Mitch,, loved it and enjoyed,.and your poem really reminded me fo the song.. your mommy should just have had smacked you on the head,,lol,,paying you back for the funny comment on my poem,,later Mitch,... p.d.