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Bed of petals

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Bed of petals

There it lay unseen by man
On a bed  of rose petals
Perfume wafting as on a fan
Dew shimmers as it settles.

Who or what, lies within
What secret does the petals  hide
Whats snuggled down in sleep
Its a leveret we will name "Abide"

Your mam was killed your all alone
Could see you were distressed
Knew you would be safe with me
Close to my petals pressed
 
Come little man no one to hurt you
Hidden  amongst the petals soft
"Abide" with me your safe from danger
Until your strength for life is crossed

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  1. Date: 4/3/2013 2:49:00 PM
    Yes, it does have a hint of mystery, as caleb states! NIcely done for the contest, Seren. Isn't that a beautiful topic she gave us?

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/4/2013 3:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Andrea , its funny how different people see things in a write....Seren
  1. Date: 4/3/2013 10:43:00 AM
    very interesting...a little mysterious too...I LIKE it!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/3/2013 10:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad you likr it Caleb....Seren
  1. Date: 4/3/2013 1:34:00 AM
    Very personal. I like it though. It has that challenge aspect and is well written. Nice work Seren.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/4/2013 3:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Wayland, glad you liked the read...Seren
  1. Date: 4/2/2013 5:22:00 AM
    This is a brilliant write Seren, a simply brilliant write! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this morning! What a special piece, quite the enlightening and romantic poem, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/4/2013 3:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Russell...Seren
  1. Date: 4/2/2013 1:13:00 AM
    very nice written :) enjoyed so much thank you my dearest freind Seren for sharing :) <3 Sk

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/2/2013 1:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, for stopping by and commenting...Seren