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Becoming the River

Becoming The River If I were a river nothing could hold me back not mountains or valleys not concrete or steel. If I were a river others would feel my power hour after hour as I hurried off the beaten track with my liquid pulse pounding the shore my voice, a steady roar. On and on without pity through the country side. around the city down the mountain in a daring leap on and on I’d swiftly keep moving. Churning, turning from dusk till dawn in sunlight or moonlight on and on till the end of time. Nothing would stop me for I'm the river and I will go on and on and on…

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Date: 1/26/2019 3:42:00 PM
This is so descriptive of the force of the flowing river, very inspiring!
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/26/2019 4:44:00 PM
Thank you Michelle. Hugs, Susan
Date: 1/23/2019 10:48:00 PM
wow beautiful feelings and poetic expression
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/24/2019 4:57:00 PM
Thank you Mahtab. I appreciate that. Blessings, Susan
Date: 1/22/2019 2:00:00 PM
I think, Susan, you would make a beautiful, powerful river. And I would not think anyone could hold you back. Well done!
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/22/2019 3:42:00 PM
Thank you Caren! I love rivers, oceans, lakes and creeks. And of course, I love waterfalls. The sounds are heavenly. Blessings. :) Susan
Date: 1/22/2019 11:55:00 AM
Very nice! I enjoyed this poem. Well done :)
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/22/2019 12:04:00 PM
Thank you Heidi. I am glad you enjoyed it. :)

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