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Becoming Mother Nature

What if Mother Nature retired, and I applied for her position? How would I dare to assume  her secret duties, her un-ending cycles Could I invoke such power, or must I simply become her? Spin myself into a cocoon of natural faith. Let the atoms of the cosmos transform my light into spirit.   Would I then emerge, complete with every force of mystery? Awaken each day with a pink mist, and burn each evening sky with crimson? Command each leaf, each breath and every symphony of living? Would I wear her gowns of argent, lavender and aqua? Step lightly on mossy stones, and dance upon silvery meadows? Grace the heavens in cloud-white glinting wings and in the depths of darkest night bear stars, filled with the promise of every new beginning? In Honor of my Fave Poems Andrea Dietrich. First Place. 101 in a ROW contest -2 Contest Judged: 7/27/2016 9:30:00 PM Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A 5th. Place

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Date: 6/2/2021 10:14:00 PM
Love the whole concept ~ Well penned, SuZ
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Date: 4/12/2021 2:22:00 AM
stupendous writing; superb poem penned
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/15/2021 4:07:00 AM
Thankyou Mahtab: I appreciate your kind comment. SuZ
Date: 7/9/2016 8:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win with your fantastic poem, such vivid imagery and wonderful lines.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/15/2021 4:10:00 AM
Hi Seosamh: You are so nice to send congratulations. Most appreciated. SuZ
Date: 7/8/2016 3:55:00 PM
Fantastic imagery, Suzanne! A lovely write! Congrats!
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Date: 4/15/2021 4:10:00 AM
Thanks so much, Kim:
Date: 7/8/2016 4:09:00 AM
Congrats Suzanne, for your placement with this deep, spiritual, enchanting piece!! ;-)
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Date: 7/7/2016 1:36:00 PM
Hello Lovely Suzanne, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "PAIN GETS IN THE WAY OF FORGIVENESS" if you'd like..... Love LINDA
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Date: 7/7/2016 1:32:00 PM
I love the imaginative way you have become one with nature !! Lovely poem, Suzanne !!
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Date: 6/1/2013 2:26:00 PM
, CONGRATS! ;-) ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/1/2013 9:54:00 AM
Suzanne, Congratulations in Kim M's contest... have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 5/31/2013 8:01:00 PM
I love the unique twist you gave this contest. This is a delight!!
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Date: 5/31/2013 6:02:00 PM
Marvelous work! Kim
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Date: 4/21/2013 2:17:00 PM
congrats on your winning fave poem, some beautiful imagery in this, particularly in the second stanza :)
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Date: 4/20/2013 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations :-)
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Date: 4/19/2013 10:10:00 PM
Many congrats my dear poet friend! This is indeed great and amazing ! Soo love it & so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing! Have a grace-filled day! Love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 4/19/2013 9:52:00 PM
Hi Suzanne, , Congratulations IN HONOR OF Andrea's favorite POEM contest. *Always & Forever' @->- LINDA -<-@
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Date: 4/19/2013 8:41:00 PM
Suzanne, a sweet win~*~SKAT
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Date: 4/8/2013 6:02:00 PM
Dear Suzanne,The vivid imagery of this marvelous MasterPiece,coupled with YOUR "Nature POEMS"YOU would be a shoo in for the Position of "Mother Nature"I vote for YOU.Close the ballot.YOU Win unanimously!! Superb Pen. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Spirit Patient...Harry
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Date: 4/8/2013 3:45:00 PM
Suzanne, was this shown at PFT? It seems vaguely familiar to me. I was just reading several of your poems. I think this is one of my favorites of yours!! I always love best when you employ great imagery in free verse. FAVE.
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Date: 4/7/2013 3:03:00 PM
Suzanne that would be one heck of a challenge...David
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/7/2013 3:30:00 PM
was it something some-one said? "Dream big dreams."

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