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Become a Poet

I know nothing of meters and such Never was one to read poetry much Spent most of my life in the dark A lost soul trying to make his mark To free myself of my own plight Picked up a pen and started to write No idea what I would write about I opened my soul let it all pour out Lost in the plight of father time I wrote out rhyme after rhyme Through my poems it occurred to me I’m no longer bound my mind is free And with-in that freedom what I found Every beating heart has its own sound Many years later and free of the dope I found in the Lord a brand new hope Straight from my heart I hope I show it It was truly my fate to become a poet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/13/2009 10:42:00 AM
Absolutely!! Very well put. Good write.
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Date: 2/8/2009 6:33:00 AM
That was how I started to write poetry as well! No idea of the forms, no idea of syllables, never read poems before! You are truly gifted! I like reading your work, cause you write what you feel! good job ~ Arany
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Date: 2/7/2009 9:49:00 AM
Check your soup mail Mr. Poet. : ) Love, Shar
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Date: 2/4/2009 9:04:00 AM
A poet to me is one who reveals himself to himself through words and art. You learned more about yourself by writing did you not?Yes, my friend you are a great poet. Michael
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Date: 2/3/2009 9:04:00 AM
I don't know how you do it! Your words come to life--making me feel and see--You are a talented young man! Keep up the awesome work! I love reading your treasures!
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Date: 1/30/2009 4:55:00 AM
Awesome write. Your poems bring healing and therapy to others that read it. Great write.
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Date: 1/26/2009 9:09:00 PM
awesome! I believe you are supposed to be a poet, with your amazing and honest words they reach our hearts and feel what you feel. This is amazing Michael, you are truly blessed :) Love, ~Michaela~
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Date: 1/26/2009 6:47:00 PM
very lovely work hun. May God bless you and your work.
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Date: 1/26/2009 6:09:00 PM
Yes Michael, God blessed you with the love of poetry, and the ability to paint such beautiful works with your pen...the wonders of His love are endless....love this write dear friend...always, Christy
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Date: 1/26/2009 1:55:00 PM
And a great one! dear Michael. Just to let you know , I will be away from the soup for awhile. I promised myself I would complete my novel this year, and the only way I can do it, is to give it my full attention. I will be checking in from time-to-time. In the meantime, I will be thinking of you. yf4l. Love to you and your family, Lainie
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Date: 1/26/2009 12:35:00 PM
Michael J...You have the ability to show your true feelings..it's not always enough to able to write if you dont have the soul...you do. BG
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Date: 1/26/2009 12:15:00 PM
Honesty spillled out from your pen What a clever piece you wrote then. Very well done I think this is a very clever poem. REgards Déirdre Ó Maidín. Thanks for noting my poem on Berlin
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Date: 1/26/2009 10:47:00 AM
gift as I believe I do and you let it shine so beautifully.. I enjoy reading your work...Excellent write Michael.. as always for you..God Bless You And Your Family...*Tyesha
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Date: 1/26/2009 10:44:00 AM
You show it beautifully!! through all your struggles and battles in life, you are now able to write about and share with others what you have been through as well as what you have accomplished..That is something awesome to be proud of..As I was growing up dealing with life the best way I knew how, being afraid to speak out against the pain I was suffering, I just started to write, all my deepest feelings..Maybe I thought that no one would understand, But paper understood.You have a true cont~
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Date: 1/26/2009 9:49:00 AM
And so many people are so glad you did. So therapeutic and healing, your gift of faith combined with your talent of writing ~ a winning combination, for you most importantly, but for others as well. Love this write Michael. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/26/2009 9:29:00 AM
Wow...it IS my fate too or so I believe.
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Date: 1/26/2009 7:45:00 AM
Wonderful write, Micheal. The freedom that writing gives you shines through your work I can relate because it helps me free my mind, as you saw this morning. Thank you for your comment. :) Love and best wishes always, Robin
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Date: 1/26/2009 7:37:00 AM
It was indeed Michael..one season leads to another...let your talent continue to create.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/26/2009 6:56:00 AM
No doubt about it, Michael...you have a poet's heart! ~ Love, Carrie (ps...reminds me of my dad, who had no formal education, quit school early, was a cowboy at heart, yet he wrote beautiful music and poetry all his life...it was in his soul).
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Date: 1/26/2009 6:41:00 AM
You make it look , easy MJ . We know , life has'nt been easy , in those " dark days" , but the light is shining , so you write onnnnn ...
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Date: 1/26/2009 5:32:00 AM
I like this read MJ --yeah you are a poet.. and you show it :)
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