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Beckoning Me

The garden gate gently calls out to me Blowing in the breeze like a young girls dress Showing to me the unobtainable So many emotions I must suppress.  Freedom calls beckoning me to follow Fingers curved in, teasing me to go on Shall I shan't I decisions to be made What's out there making me wish to be gone Is it the promise of a special meal Or a day in the health spa to look good Guess its none of these things that makes me feel Like escaping through that gate by the wood It's the Sales bargains to be got Must go now or I will miss the lot.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/18/2012 2:14:00 PM
love this Seren, told as it really is,, only you can make the decission good luck,
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/18/2012 2:39:00 PM
would I go to the sales and spend lots of pennies,as if lol....Seren
Date: 12/18/2012 12:04:00 PM
Just remember you will only be returning it in a few days, save yourself a journey, don't go lol xx
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Date: 12/18/2012 2:39:00 PM
Haha thats true, what looks good in the shop looks crap when you get it home ...Seren
Date: 12/18/2012 10:15:00 AM
When I was gainfully employed before retiring, sales meant nothing to me. NOW I'm the OLD GEEZER COUPON KING!!! Merry Christmas! Love Jack
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/18/2012 11:13:00 AM
Nadolig Llawen Jack. Your not old just matured like fine wine or cheese whichever tickles your fancy. ...Seren
Date: 12/18/2012 7:08:00 AM
Sales are the best. Only way to buy. Thanks for sharing your witty write Seren. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/18/2012 11:14:00 AM
True Connie one four lettered word I like SALE.....Seren
Date: 12/18/2012 6:38:00 AM
LOL, you go girl. And don't forget. It's Christmas so hubby can pay for the whole lot. Go crazy! What a fun poem.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/18/2012 11:15:00 AM
No hubby, so the paying stays here. Lol. Thanks for stopping by....Seren
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Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 12/18/2012 6:40:00 AM
Sending you soup mail
Date: 12/18/2012 1:53:00 AM
Hi Seren don't melt your plastic now...resist ha ha ha...I like ...David
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/18/2012 11:17:00 AM
Oops. Resist*
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/18/2012 11:16:00 AM
Residt omg Dafydd you joke.....Seren

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