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because of you

His eyes are amazing so serious and so blue
And when he tells you something you know that its true
He takes my breathe away with the small things that he does
He makes me realize what a mistake the last guy was
He shows me how a woman should be treated with respect
Hes an excellent father he spends time and does not neglect
If he makes a promise he will not break it at all
Even if he is exhausted and about to fall
A hard worker he is for sure,the best guy i've met before
He makes me feel special like i matter to him
He makes me feel like my life has just started to begin
When i feel weak he makes me feel strong
He tells me when im right and tells me when im wrong
Hes a special guy that opened my eyes
And made me realize it worth another try
My heart is free and i can trust again
And its all because i let you in
How could i ask for a better friend
I never want this relationship to end

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  1. Date: 11/29/2011 12:23:00 PM
    Congrats on your win! loved your poem "because of you"... Love GiGi JuNeBuG

  1. Date: 11/28/2011 12:39:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Ed's "What makes you wake up each and everyday" contest Crystal. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/26/2011 7:11:00 AM
    Truely remarkable write! Congratulations on the win.

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 10:57:00 PM
    Very nice testimonial to your special guy. Congratulations on your win Crystal

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 8:31:00 PM
    Congratulations. Joyce

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 6:31:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win with this lovely write!----lori

  1. Date: 11/1/2011 10:32:00 AM
    Beautiful poem Crystal.....a well deserved win...(hugs)

  1. Date: 11/1/2011 5:23:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Matt's "Wolfman Falls In Love" contest Crystal. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/31/2011 9:57:00 PM
    Congratulations on the win with this fine poem, Crystal

  1. Date: 10/31/2011 12:58:00 PM
    Wow,...I am with Matt on where is the werewolf, yet I see him vaguely. Very sneaky and elusive writing. Congrats on this winning entry. The human side of your wolf is a Gwendolen

  1. Date: 10/31/2011 12:54:00 PM
    You never mention werewolf in this poem, and almost 90% of the time I will bypass those poems that don't have some relation to the contest theme in their content. But this was so heartfelt and touching, and even the thought that the werewolf is/might be involved in this without ever mentioning him, somehow, it then becomes provocative.

  1. Date: 10/11/2011 5:47:00 PM
    wonderful poem,,,i enjoyed it,,very talented writing....

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    Date: 10/12/2011 3:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you