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Beauty Still Stays

Our position was on top of the summit Then downward we started to plummet; Snow and ice seemed to be everywhere So we had to descend with much care. High up on tall mountain, we had been And thought and thrill of doing it again Entered our minds reaching the bottom; Will go again next year in the autumn For a while we will continue to yearn; Majestic mountain is where we will return And see leaves as their colors do change To bright ones which at bottom re-arrange. All deciduous trees did become bare; Snow and ice now was every where And although I have become much older Beauty still stays in eye of the beholder. jthorn5656@atmc.net

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Date: 8/18/2013 9:55:00 PM
This is really nicely written. I really love the rhyme and tone of this piece. Very nicely done. :)
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James Horn
Date: 9/11/2014 11:25:00 AM
Sorry I haven't responded in so long. Noticed that Soup is having a fall/Autumn poetry Contest. Bye for now. Jim Horn

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