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Beauty of a Sunset

Sitting on top of the mountain I was exclaiming at the beauty of a sunset I wouldn't want a life without nature in it. Now as I age I face far greater limitations, I felt so many varieties of emptiness lately. I need to block the meaningful communication, and be willing to become transformed to ignore what my ego is saying, and listen to my soul. I have but one dream that's my family, one heart that's me in them with them no matter wherever they are, near or far we will reach that star, we will spend much time as a family, it never happened . My life is sad although I did nothing that bad to deserve to live, as lonesome as it can get. I yearn to live a life where all is bright and everything is alright before losing my insight. That is why unfortunately my choices and options became more limited. Living in the past I had to learn how to live my life with those restrictions, imposed on me due to our financial circumstances, because of the sixteen years of war in our country. My heart is homeless escaped to lay on a pavement, beg a passer by offer a tissue to wipe away the unspoken, that was hiding in me for years. Oh! twister, whirl me strongly towards spring showers, wet my brain with a drop of water to surface intact, accept that my loneliness is doomed. Alone I am. Therese Bacha 14 September 2014 Contest for PD. A poem never put in a contest before.

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Date: 9/19/2019 6:14:00 PM
I love your poetry I wish you will read mine and rate it for me
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Date: 1/1/2015 10:49:00 AM
Congrats on the high win and wish you happy new year, Therese
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/1/2015 7:28:00 PM
Hello DR. Ram, Happy New Year, thank you so much for passing by to review my poem. Coming from you it is an honor. Regards. Terry xo
Date: 1/1/2015 8:55:00 AM
Such an emotional piece- many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/1/2015 7:29:00 PM
Hi Jan, Happy New Year, so nice of you to pass by to review my poem, and leave such a beautiful review. Regards Terry xoxo
Date: 1/1/2015 8:09:00 AM
- A contest that I had forgotten - Congratulations your wonderful winning poem, Terry - Happy New Year !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/1/2015 7:30:00 PM
Happy New Year, To you Ann, so nice of you to pass by to review my poem, and leave such a beautiful review. You were always a faithful friend. Regards Terry xoxo
Date: 1/1/2015 1:09:00 AM
glad to see you won big with this one and have a happy new year, dear terry.
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/1/2015 7:37:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Happy New Year to you to, and God bless your family. Thank you for passing by Andrea, I know I have not written to you lately, but my son had a small incident concerning his health, so till I got the results positive, I was unable to share. I will be busy starting Monday, to go back to his restaurant everyday to help him out. I promise to drop by. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 12/31/2014 9:04:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win and happy new year Therese...huggs
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/1/2015 7:31:00 PM
Happy New Year, so nice of you to pass by to review my poem, and leave such a beautiful review. Regards Terry xoxo
Date: 12/31/2014 8:51:00 PM
Hello Therese,, thank you for supporting my contest. I'm taking this time to enjoy and invite you on over to my latest contest "Busted." Drop by if you'd like or have the time. Take Care, and enjoy the 2015... Happy new Year... Love Linda
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/1/2015 7:34:00 PM
Hello PD, I am so so happy you are back, and on top, giving me such an honor to be on your list as number one, it touched me so deeply. You always judged my poems with lots of care, and you make me so proud of myself. Happy New Year PD, and may God grant you all your wishes. Love Terry xoxoxo I will drop by to read your poem. xooxoxxo
Date: 11/19/2014 12:29:00 PM
My dearest T...this is exactly what I was talking about before...the title says it all....sometimes the beauty of the sunset is the thing that gets us through a day..thank you for sharing this
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Therese Bacha
Date: 11/19/2014 12:50:00 PM
Hi D. At last you appeared, I send yo many mail to see how you are, you got me worried as u never answered me back. Just to know are you OK D. I feel not. I am here for u. Love Terry xoox
Date: 10/14/2014 10:14:00 AM
Hello Therese, Second message from me. You are doing very fine with everything. Keep writing and working at everything. Don't ever let anyone tell you different about your abilities. All of us are similar and yet different level. And you should know that on reading some of the supposed "great published poets," many of them are really no better than many of us are. They're lucky, however, because they got some things published and are in the main stream. We all can do that to!! Cheers, Gary
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Therese Bacha
Date: 10/14/2014 10:29:00 AM
You are such a caring person Gary, to take some time to write another sharing review, lifting my moral. I liked the way you offered me to feel great. Take care, we will see each other soon. Terry xo By the way, I wrote a new poem about my past. If you want to read it. I felt good writing it down. Thanks xoxoxo
Date: 10/13/2014 4:18:00 PM
Hello Therese, A most heartfelt and compelling free verse composition. The emotion, passion and pain are quite obvious, but you articulate them and express their meaning so well here in your work. I enjoyed your write here immensely!! Very Powerful Indeed!! My Best Wishes and Cheers, Gary
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Therese Bacha
Date: 10/13/2014 4:46:00 PM
Hello Gary, your review touched my heart, you send me a message that i can write poetry, and this made me so happy. I never felt I had enough potentials to write poetry. Bless you Hugs Terry xoxoxo
Date: 10/11/2014 1:23:00 AM
This is a very heartfelt write my dear friend Therese. I was so delighted to read this well-done poem of yours. Thank you so much for sharing your life and this gem. Hope everything is doin well with you. Thanks a lot as well for your precious time stopping by on my page. Big hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Therese Bacha
Date: 10/13/2014 4:43:00 PM
Hello Leonora, I have been away for quite a while, but I am planing to get back here on Poetry. I have missed you all. Thank you my friend for passing by to review this poem. It means a lot to me. Hugs Terry xoxo
Date: 10/7/2014 2:01:00 PM
Very emotive and expressive work..Sometimes our hearts ache with pain but those around don't have a clue..I enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for the get well wishes on my blog..I went to the surgeon today and he dismissed me..He says I am fine just change my diet to low fat..Sara
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Therese Bacha
Date: 10/7/2014 2:09:00 PM
I am so happy to read that Sara, God loves you and your family. Try as much as you can, not to eat heavy food. You can do it I am sure. Thank God for keeping you safe. Bless you Sara, write to me anytime you feel like it. Hugs Terry xoxo
Date: 10/4/2014 10:59:00 PM
terry, I was thinking of you after seeing your sweet words to Lucilla and so I was surprised to come here and see you had posted a poem just last month. I really like this and I know how painful your past life was. And how much you adore your sons. I hope you are not alone and that you are still with your friend or your sons. Soupmail.
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Therese Bacha
Date: 10/4/2014 11:16:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I am so so sad about Lucy, i knew although she was not OK, but it tore my heart away. Thank you Andrea for reading my poem, and as usual you leave me a heartfelt review. I do appreciate that so much. I hope you are doing great. See u Terry xoxo
Date: 9/30/2014 5:38:00 PM
To be alone in a bloody crowd, feeling of loss it is my shroud, but act another part and then, change your mood, be young again, and bloody laugh out loud, mood swings are allowed , im having one of them (me) who am i today and when??? Don re Therese Bacha 'Beauty Of A Sunset'
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Date: 9/22/2014 11:39:00 PM
what a powerful piece terry of writing dear friend i tip my hat smiling
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Date: 9/19/2014 9:53:00 PM
This Is a very emotional piece done well, from the heart, the best part is, when you write "I have but one dream" because Therese, that's all any life needs.
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Date: 9/15/2014 10:08:00 AM
Very deep and captivating write on the beauty of a sunset, therese
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Date: 9/15/2014 3:32:00 AM
Ow sweet lady.How are you?How have you been?So happy to see you.Search deeper,dont be scared of your silence ,but listen to it.Jesus loves you.He gives you life for a purpose,you could be the mentor of manyhere at soup.You have survived the abyss of war,you will survive it all(the loneliness) I mean..A big big hug..Charma
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