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Beauty In Paris, France

(french) Le Soleil se couche derriere les Eiffel De la promenade J’admire Une memoire pittoresque * * * * * * * * * * (english) **Sun sets behind the Eiffel From the boardwalk I adore A picturesque memory Haiku Miranda Lambert 4/8/2011

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/9/2011 9:04:00 AM

I too cherish Eiffel's memories even today after two decades, Miranda. I learnt French long back now only can understand a bit.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2011 8:54:00 AM

Awesome way to try out your French, Miranda.There are many similarities between Spanish and French. I could understand this pretty much without the translation. I remember the one time I flew into Italy, I could understand the airline hostess almost perfectly.Italian is very CRISP and also like Spanish. Eiffel Tower is wonderful and so is your haiku!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/8/2011 1:29:00 PM

Hey, you did a great job, Randa! I saw the blog photo and you described it beautifully here. The French looks perfect to me. I didn't even need the translation. My sister once taught French (as well as English) so if you'd like, I'll email it to her and see what she says. She is very fluent in French as well as Spanish. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/8/2011 11:18:00 AM

As this week draws to an end here I sit reading such excellent poetry. I am happy yours is one of the ones I am reading today Randa. I wish you a healthy, joyful, inspiration filled weekend. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/8/2011 10:50:00 AM

ohhh,randa.. fascinating landsacle and great words in both languages.. elegant work! :) huggs, nette