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Beauty In Motion

Beauty in motion as soft as a sigh. Small luminous wings waltz with a spring breeze. A delicate creature has caught my eye - Beauty in motion as soft as a sigh. Pink and white blossoms are stirring in trees. They dance as the butterfly flutters by - Beauty in motion as soft as a sigh. Small luminous wings waltz with a spring breeze. For the Butterfly Flutters By Contest of Kelly Deschler

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/18/2018 7:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Andrea. Tom

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/18/2018 9:59:00 AM

Beautiful work Andrea, congratulations...

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/18/2018 9:33:00 AM

Lovely, Andrea. Superbly done. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 2/18/2018 9:22:00 AM

Absolutely gorgeous Triolet, Andrea, and a wonderful flow of imagery and phrasing ... love it! Congrats, Buddy! :-) <3

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/17/2014 4:40:00 PM

Belated congratulations on your first place win. Freddie would love this one. He might of seen at the time but I know he loved triolets and this one is spot on.

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 6/13/2014 11:32:00 PM

I don't know if it's just that I don't read nearly enough or WHAAT? BUT Andrea yir' Shitake is gettin' even better than it was. I mean it!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2014 8:27:00 PM

Andrea, Congratulations, in Kelly's Butterfly Fluttering By.. Sweet move... LINDA

Theresa Stephens

Date: 6/8/2014 9:50:00 AM

Hi Andrea, Your poems lovely descriptive words are equally balanced with poetry in motion feelings. Well done deserves a 1st place win. All the best Theresa xx

Theresa Stephens

Date: 6/8/2014 9:48:00 AM

Hi Andrea, Your poems lovely descriptive words are equally balanced with poetry in motion feelings. Well done deserves a 1st place win. All the best Theresa xx

Kiran Bantawa

Date: 6/5/2014 7:28:00 AM

lovely and congrats!

Paul Callus

Date: 6/5/2014 2:26:00 AM

Congrats on your top placing, Andrea! Another form...another superb rendering! Lovely triolet that IS beauty in motion:) // paul

Faye Gibson

Date: 6/4/2014 1:24:00 PM

Congratulations, Andrea, I like sitting up here with you. Beautiful poem as always.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/4/2014 7:16:00 AM

Hi Andrea, congratulations on your great, big win! Well-deserved!

Elaine George

Date: 6/4/2014 6:44:00 AM

As this is beauty in motion. Many congrat's on this winning Triolet, Andrea. bfn Lainie

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/4/2014 6:38:00 AM

Congrats on your beautiful write and win!!

Mel Merrill

Date: 6/4/2014 2:24:00 AM

Congrats Andrea...life is good for you--two #is...Good for you. I liked this one a lot--short and sweet, but elegant and sweet. Soft as a sigh did it. Nice line :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 6/3/2014 10:03:00 PM

Superb Andrea ! words very sublime woven so well into this amazing poetic form,, ,congrats on top place win !

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/3/2014 8:09:00 PM

Had to sigh when I read it. so beautiful. congrats. BG

Kelly Deschler

Date: 6/3/2014 8:04:00 PM

This was such an elegant and beautiful write, Andrea. The words are so soft, almost like whispers. Congratulations on your first place win!

Joseph May

Date: 6/3/2014 7:40:00 PM

Congrats on a great win Andrea

Monterey Sirak

Date: 6/3/2014 5:44:00 AM

This is a gem! Your images dance delicately like the butterfly.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/3/2014 2:04:00 AM

For a Triolet to flow like the way this one does, you have to choose just the perfect repeating lines and you certainly have done that in this enchanting poem Andrea! I loved it!

Justin Bordner

Date: 6/1/2014 1:14:00 AM

Your poetry is beauty in motion Andrea, I guess that makes you a butterfly, with teeth. I like the repeating lines. J.A.B.

Darren Watson

Date: 5/30/2014 11:03:00 PM

Painted a beautiful picture in my mind that I will long remember .

Elaine George

Date: 5/30/2014 12:02:00 PM

Breathtakingly beautiful, Andrea. Lainie