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Beauty in Motion

His smile awaiting
His bright eyes like deep, dark pools
Skin so unblemished 
His walk---so swift and so smooth
Intense skipping of my heart

Copyright © Brandee Augustus

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  1. Date: 10/1/2010 6:13:00 AM
    The heart must skip if we will play ... the game as beautiful as our poetry. One love

  1. Date: 9/13/2010 5:38:00 AM
    A nice way to describe the one you love(especially liked the last line"Intense skipping of my heart". Emilia

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 3:51:00 AM
    Such a nice take on the challenge Brandee-- you sure expressed that beauty in a guy well ;) -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 8:54:00 PM
    Brandee, a souper congratulations on your great Tanka, showing "beauty in motion"....not that I swing that way! lol~Chris

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 6:33:00 PM
    My heart would pound too !!....hmmm, this is romantic and sensual ! Nicely done! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 5:46:00 PM
    Brandee, Congratulations on your placement in Rick's contest tanka contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 5:28:00 PM
    Congratulations on the win in the contest, Brandee

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 4:53:00 AM
    Congratulations Brandee on your win in Rick Parise's contest "A Memory Of Beauty". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/29/2010 8:55:00 PM
    Very nice Brandee,. Congratulations Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/29/2010 7:33:00 PM
    Love it , BRandee. Wish it could have scored even higher. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/29/2010 6:49:00 PM
    Congrats Brandee on your HM in Rick's Tanka contest... awesome as usual... enjoy your honor ..with luv..

  1. Date: 8/27/2010 2:04:00 PM
    AHHH, real beauty!! I have seen it too. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/25/2010 6:55:00 PM
    A wonderful description of beauty in motion, Brandee. Good luck

  1. Date: 8/25/2010 3:25:00 PM
    That sounds like true love, adoration of one who makes your heart skip a beat. Lovely tanka, Brandee. Best wishes, Carolyn