Beauty In Life Spontaneity

Blank pages of life - spontaneous, unscripted, undefined Experiences uncovers blues and rhymes one couldn't find Begin to indite, though endings pave unsure and unplanned Culture, law, ethics and education; man learns and understand Defining, refining and reminding they try to do to mankind Blank pages of life - spontaneous, unscripted, undefined Attempt to break traditions,"outside tries", don't be confined Falling and committing mistakes will not leave anyone behind Begin to indite, though endings pave unsure and unplanned Reach for something in the distance, consider a wise stand Drench without inhibitions, "LA VITA E BELLA" bear in mind Blank pages of life - spontaneous, unscripted, undefined Anxieties, fear, poverty and inferiority they can blind Yet, live! live! embrace whole life! don't ever decline! Begin to indite, though endings pave unsure and unplanned Remember! NOT everyone can be given a fair second chance Affectionate at heart and sagacious mind, manage to combine Blank pages of life - spontaneous, unscripted, undefined Begin to indite, though endings pave unsure and unplanned BY: olive_eloi 2:14 am 03/28/2014 CONTEST: Rhyme Battle: Round 4 Free Poetry Contest Details SPONSOR: JULI - MICHELLE 6TH PLACE

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/6/2014 2:56:00 AM

Beautifully penned! Congrats on your victory!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/6/2014 5:03:00 AM

thank you so much for the visit.. :) i appreciate it.. :)

Skat A

Date: 4/3/2014 10:17:00 PM

OLIVE, congrats on your AWESOME win. .. Luv ~SKAT~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/6/2014 5:02:00 AM

thanks sKat.. :) nice visit of you.. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/3/2014 1:14:00 PM

nice win... PD

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/6/2014 5:00:00 AM

Thank you so much for passing by :) to God be the greatest glory.. :D

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 3/29/2014 9:27:00 AM

Yes, live. I like "not everyone can be given a fair second chance". Not everyone gets a second chance. Go or bust :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/31/2014 7:23:00 AM

thank you for the visit.. :) i appreciate it.. :) to GOd be the greatest glory.. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/28/2014 5:45:00 PM

These are no so easy to write but it seems that you can pull them off with ease..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/31/2014 7:17:00 AM

i really just give it a try Sara.. :D thanks for the visit ... I really appreciate it.. :D to God be the glory.. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 3/28/2014 3:24:00 PM

Wow Olive_eloi ! Also a philosopher deep down :) and written in an assertive, powerful way. Somewhat different from the latest posts. enjoyed. // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 4/4/2014 11:22:00 AM

Congrats on fine win Olive_eloi. You merit every bit of it :) :) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/28/2014 3:57:00 PM

thanks for the visit Paul.. :) happy weekend to you and your family.. :) to God be the greatest glory.. :)