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Crawling along the sidewalk, his tiny legs wiggling along with his wriggling, squiggly body, he creeps me out! If he survives the elements or the stampede of hard-soled monster feet upon his too-soft squishy body, he will perform a disappearing act! Spewing sticky strands from glands near his mouth, he twists himself into an ugly shell hidden and hanging from a common twig. Shedding skin, he slowly reveals his chrysalis self. At last, his inner beauty, that rare beauty in disguise, will have changed before our amazed eyes into the colorful radiant wings of a splendid butterfly! Written Jan. 4, 2016 and pretty much my only free verse so far this year!

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Date: 3/23/2017 12:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win again, Andrea … ~*
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Date: 3/22/2017 9:03:00 AM
Congrats Andrea, for your placement with this gift for us to read!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/22/2017 3:15:00 AM
Congrats!
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Date: 1/13/2017 4:22:00 AM
Congrats well done xxx
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Date: 1/12/2017 10:45:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/12/2017 10:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place poem Andrea ! Once again, an awesome poem.
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Date: 1/11/2017 9:43:00 AM
I cannot think of a more beautiful transformation, similar to the polliwog/frog, but to most people, frogs do not represent beauty. Congratulations, Andrea, on your well done piece, perfect for Julia's contest.
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Date: 1/11/2017 3:04:00 AM
Beautifully written and perfect for this contest. Congratulations on your 1st place win. :) Hugs, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/10/2017 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea. Transformations are inexplicable...
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Date: 1/10/2017 8:29:00 AM
So perfect for the theme, Andrea, and you brought the disguised beauty to life with your wonderful imagery. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/8/2017 8:48:00 AM
Just a beautiful tribute to one of natures greats.
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Date: 1/7/2017 1:08:00 AM
Lovely tribute to a lovely creature...Carole Duet
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Date: 1/6/2017 7:58:00 PM
Oh heck yes! : ) Well done, Andrea! I think this is also called an 'inscape' - "the unique essence or inner nature of a person, place, thing, or event, especially depicted in poetry or a work of art."
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Date: 1/6/2017 7:07:00 PM
ohh my, pure beauty goes through a series of transformation, andie... picture perfect!.. huggs
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Date: 1/6/2017 3:42:00 PM
Nature does some crazy things to produce such fragile beauty
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Date: 1/6/2017 3:20:00 PM
Hi Andrea, You did a good with the contest. Isn't it amazing how that little caterpillar transformes into a beautiful butterfly? It reads like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/6/2017 3:17:00 PM
This is very beautiful, Andrea, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/6/2017 10:22:00 AM
What a coincidence Andrea, I raised 3 butterflies last year. Actually "We are all butterflies waiting to happen." Beauty of nature very well captured in words. A7 for this. Thanks for visiting "My Garden Family" ##Archana
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Date: 1/6/2017 10:08:00 AM
"wiggling along" "soft squishy body" "rare beauty in disguise" sounds like you are describing yourself, Andie:)
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Date: 1/6/2017 5:56:00 PM
very funny. hahaha. (The body you got right but I RUN when I walk!!)
Date: 1/6/2017 9:16:00 AM
Andrea, this is quite wonderful, you certainly found beauty in disguise with this amazing write, a winner ~
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Date: 1/6/2017 6:40:00 AM
Very nicely done Andrea, every time I see a caterpillar I have similar thoughts, what will be if you survive.
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Date: 1/6/2017 3:28:00 AM
This is beautiful sweet Andrea.
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Date: 1/6/2017 3:05:00 AM
Wonderful the way you brought out its beauty...great observation. :)
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Date: 1/6/2017 12:35:00 AM
This is beautiful, Andrea! A masterclass tribute to the art of God. A 7, no doubt. Best wishes in the contest.
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