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Beauty In a Bubble

she smiles behind the bubble it's shimmery translucence enhances her enticingly out of reach yet i reach out touching the bubble, i notice its firmness but not hard like stone it's supple like youthful skin that can be pierced and its life giving blood released her smile falters has i remove my hand from the bubble we talk some more her laughter is infectious i lose all track of time watching, listening, and learning but later has we say goodbye i am the one smiling smiling because i know that i will return tomorrow but this time with a safety pin so i can bust that %@!#$! bubble

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/21/2009 8:07:00 PM
How witty and clever you are with your magnificent work Brian. Enjoyed this much!
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Date: 4/16/2009 3:33:00 PM
yeah im reading this one now,i'm watching listening and learning too-cos a lot is written here-it flows wonderfully-i can lend you a safety pin-smile;-)-charma
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Date: 3/16/2009 1:12:00 AM
Great imaginative write Brian with a twist,Fine work here.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/5/2009 3:01:00 PM
That last line gave me a chuckle...very cleverly written. - Monique
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