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The entirety of this poem (except verse 2) was inspired by a lovely and rare Gambian beauty by the name Aisha! This piece is an edit of the original already given to her as her own. The verse two has been included as a substitute for the main verse which talks about Aisha's Identity. So, for this reason, this poem is dedicated to the one who inspired it.....

Bringing out waves of electrifying glamour fully captured by antennas of nature giving matter a new meaning, science a new puzzle and all phenomena, something to ponder makes even your stains worthy of adoration. Oh my lady! so shining and robed with the feminine light of the Shakespearean days the women of fine ligaments, with jars of wine, barbecue dances, chewers of berries and admirers of calm and still waters in the courtyards of medieval architectural dwelling places you top them all, even if you're from a different era Provoked fires get injured and the sun shrinks to a cup size when tears flow down your cheek. All written articles both in the heavens and the earth would be too insignificant for a worthy honour of your elegance. A faculty of goodwill from your exhale, it's finished product many are dying to inhale. Existing in the class of your own with inscriptions of Angels makes men go round the borders of the oceans until they find all appropriate words to sing the praises of your charm and the psalms of your tenderness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/25/2014 8:50:00 AM
This is a quality piece of writing, bravo!
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/26/2014 8:07:00 AM
Thanks you so much Richard.. I'm so blessed with your comments today
Date: 9/24/2014 2:01:00 AM
Amazing........Is she not one of the Daughters of Job?,,,,,, Loving the write from beginning to the end, Each line reveals her beauty..... I know a lady like that my brother but what torments me is that she is not mine.....
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/26/2014 8:06:00 AM
Oh brother.. I feel your pain bro. I understand such a situation. The lady in this piece too is a beauty from afar... But as well a good friend.
Date: 9/23/2014 11:19:00 AM
amazing very beautifully crafted with divine visions
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/26/2014 8:05:00 AM
Thanks so much Liam

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