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A beauty in the forest lived alone. One night she went outside where moonlight pooled inside a clearing. There her blue eyes shone as she looked up to see the sky bejeweled. Bejeweled with twinkling stars the heavens were! Those stars gazed down at Beauty and were so in awe of what they saw, they winked at her! She reached as if to touch them, eyes aglow! If stars could be released, to fall from sky to earth, the face of Beauty they would touch and on her cheeks, serenely, they would die from having loved a mortal far too much. Sweet Beauty, who with nature was in tune, called out to each and every twinkling star, “My dears, you are companions to the moon. I love you, but you must stay where you are.” The stars shone brighter just to hear her voice. If stars have hearts, they pulsated with love. They said, “Dear Beauty, though it’s not our choice, we’ll here remain and watch you from above.” Written June 21, 2015 for the Fantasy Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/26/2015 7:43:00 PM
Beautiful, Andrea, and such a delightful fantasy love story between the stars and the lovely mortal! Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/25/2015 3:20:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your wonderful win. *** Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! SKAT
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Date: 12/24/2015 8:29:00 PM
Beautiful write Andrea...the third stanza is my favorite...Congrats on your win
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Date: 12/24/2015 6:31:00 PM
Beautiful narrative poem--a 7-plus! Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Andrea.
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Date: 12/24/2015 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea.
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Date: 8/26/2015 5:29:00 PM
nicely done, makes me think I should go thru the pile of papers of poems and see what I can post ;)
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Date: 7/18/2015 6:29:00 PM
This was captivating from start to finish. Thank you so much for sharing this.
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Date: 7/16/2015 6:17:00 PM
I came back to read this beauty again Andrea. I believe I am caught up on all your poems now. Love the picture you have with this poem also!
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Date: 7/9/2015 4:13:00 PM
Loved this imaginative work! The imagery is astounding. Btw, I am a Leo but with a strong sattelitium (grouping) in Virgo, which covers up my Leo, including Jupiter, Venus,Mars and mercury! I have always been reserved from my earliest days. In another lifetime (this one), was an astrologer! Thanks so much for visiting my poetry.. .
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Date: 7/6/2015 4:09:00 PM
Andrea, I came back to read this beauty again, still wonderful and thanks for visiting my poem, in the morning
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Date: 7/3/2015 12:20:00 PM
Andrea, you are gifted. Love is a beauty but must be appreciated to see the beauty. so sweet to read your works always.
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Date: 7/3/2015 4:06:00 AM
Andie, I shall fave this poem of yours.. I so love the third stanza... Love the image too=)!! Brilliant!~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 7/1/2015 12:52:00 PM
You're kidding me, right? SERIOUSLY???? Andrea, I hope you appreciate the gift you have. You are just....so amazing. I wish I could write that flawlessly. My dear....You don't know what gift is yours. This is so beautiful....so...mesmerizing. I'd give it a number one place if it were my contest. I'm faving it. I'm enthralled. Hugs
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Date: 7/1/2015 1:05:00 PM
thanks for that, Eileen!! So sweet of you.
Date: 6/30/2015 2:15:00 PM
Andrea, this is really lovely , a beautiful 7 and thanks for visiting my haiku 10, I just made the list with it
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Date: 6/29/2015 2:23:00 PM
Beautiful, Andrea!! A 7 at least! Thanks for sharing this.
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Date: 6/28/2015 8:46:00 PM
So so beautiful this is ..especially the third stanza.A favourite !!!
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Date: 6/28/2015 8:54:00 PM
thanks so much, Charma
Date: 6/28/2015 4:36:00 PM
I do love it when nature speaks! It is a lot of fun to imagine things like this. I'm with the pope. We are accumulating a pile of filth so a beautiful place is a welcome relief!!!!
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Date: 6/28/2015 2:39:00 PM
Beautiful words to a lovely image Andrea, a joy to read, James :)
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Date: 6/28/2015 1:39:00 PM
A beautiful fantasy, indeed! I can't understand why you're poem didn't place in Vie' s contest. Did you ask her? I love the imaginative story...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 6/28/2015 3:21:00 AM
Terrific write, Andrea, and I agree with daver, that third stanza is a real belter. Bravo! Viv x
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Date: 6/27/2015 11:38:00 PM
What a nose write, am sure she will like it and give you pass, excellent and good luck............A.M.
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Date: 6/27/2015 5:40:00 PM
Great poem to accompany the picture. you captured the picture well! Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 6/27/2015 4:34:00 PM
Nice poem and picture! Best to you and your loved ones and look forward to seeing more of your work in the future1 Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/26/2015 10:14:00 PM
tears are those stars and the sky is dark but flowers will grow the sun rising
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Date: 6/26/2015 9:42:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I haven't been around as much, so tonight, after a glass of wine, I said I will come here first and read a poem from you, and what an adorable beautiful poem this is!
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