Beauty

Down in the valley the yellow butterfly floats in a field of white daisies capturing a moment in time Beauty Perched up high on the hillside sitting on a blanket my best girl and me arm in arm watching life roll on by Beauty Gaze into those caramelized eyes Looking deep into her loving soul her sweet killer smile grinning back at me Beauty Chasing her down the hill Rolling together in the field Soft butterfly kisses Walking hand in hand with a bouquet of daisies Beauty

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Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 12/10/2014 12:32:00 PM

Can eternal feeling be written? It`s a wonder!The butterfly among daisies.A whole world in a moment caught in picture by a gifted painter. Best wishes of the season!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/1/2014 8:54:00 PM

always the heart sings beautifully penned tim when in the presence of beauty smiles

Tim Smith
Date: 12/1/2014 10:22:00 PM

Thank you Liam my good friend

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/28/2014 3:31:00 AM

- This is really beautiful, Tim !!! - I wish you a great weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith
Date: 11/28/2014 3:45:00 AM

Thank you A-L...you have a great weekend as well...hugs Tim

Paul Callus

Date: 11/27/2014 9:27:00 AM

Hi Tim! Love all these images that you painted with your romantic brush. I see the beauty of love! Well done. #7 // paul

Tim Smith
Date: 11/27/2014 9:59:00 AM

Thanks Paul...I do have that feeling... Hope it continues....Tim

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/26/2014 7:33:00 AM

I see Beauty Beauty Beauty Beauty....

Tim Smith
Date: 11/26/2014 5:40:00 PM

Thank you Eileen my good friend...hugs tim

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/25/2014 11:18:00 PM

this is a charming read, tim... great work!.. huggs

Tim Smith
Date: 11/25/2014 11:23:00 PM

Thank you my friend...hugs Tim

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/25/2014 9:10:00 PM

Some of your best work here. Free Verse I still believe really serves you well. You write with a flow equal to rhymed verse.

Tim Smith
Date: 11/25/2014 10:24:00 PM

Thank you Maurice my friend...cheers

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/25/2014 6:41:00 PM

I was going to say something funny but I can not. This is an A7 all the way. In fact I think this deserves first prize even its not in a contest!!!! Bravo my friend.

Tim Smith
Date: 11/25/2014 10:24:00 PM

Thank you my friend...I'll take Lord Stanley's Cup :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/25/2014 6:10:00 PM

You WoWed these caramel eyes : with such a beautiful,enchanting chase down the hill.I think you two are in love : ) I 'm favouring this beauty over and over,if only I could ! Y.S.B

Tim Smith
Date: 11/25/2014 10:22:00 PM

Thank you Charma... I just might be....hugs Y.N.D

Timothy Hicks

Date: 11/25/2014 4:06:00 PM

Like David said previously, I was a sucker for the caramelized eyes part. Be even more intriguing if you had "green apple eyes" to top it off. Enjoyed the colors and the essence of springtime in this lovely poem of yours.

Tim Smith
Date: 11/25/2014 4:09:00 PM

Thank you Tim my friend...

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/25/2014 3:30:00 PM

Tim, my dear friend this is a very beautiful poem. Love butterflies and all the theme here is very lovely to me. a 7 +++++from me! Wish could give you a ten at least. But gave you a 12 instead. Lol have a wonderful evening! :) love and hugs! xxxxx D.

Tim Smith
Date: 11/25/2014 3:33:00 PM

Lol .... thank you Dorian for the 12 :) ..... hugs Tim

David Meade

Date: 11/25/2014 3:28:00 PM

I like the caramelized eyes -- I see deep browns -- deep wells to get lost in. Nicely done my good friend -- you are a master of these love words.

Tim Smith
Date: 11/25/2014 3:32:00 PM

Thank you David my good friend.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/25/2014 2:29:00 PM

Beautiful:-) Hugs jan x

Tim Smith
Date: 11/25/2014 2:34:00 PM

Thanks Jan ....hugs Tim